AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142 - Page 40

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story.
Loving it so much.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Zoya is going deeper into the web of lies...

How will she come out of it?

I liked asad's thoughts mentioned here of what he thinks of her n how he too is confused...

It's getting interesting...

N I figured from the last update n this one how Asad is going to know the truth..
N it won't be very good..

Hope Zoya would have been more courageous n told him the truth itself.



I wish she was more courageous too
I think if she tell now, he'll might get angry but will understand
But if he finds out from somewhere else, he'll be pissed πŸ˜•
Glad to know you are liking this story Tehs 😊
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Wonderful Update anda Well written part PiaπŸ‘β­οΈ</font>


<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Somewhere I feel Asad after learning that Zoya(Zoe) is really making efforts to raise Lily...he somewhere is also having a little soft spot for her in his heart...which he will never admit...I mean in the name of baby he is also trying to protect Zoya I guess..</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I don't know how Asad will get to know this...but it is still wrong...and this wrong is slowly becoming like a SIN from Zoya's side that she is just giving into Zoe's demand...</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Interesting part..</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Continue soonish..😊</font>



I totally agree with you Mayur
Asad is getting all confused with Zoya's behaviour
He wants to hate her but he can't
He is even doubting his brother
Zoya should tell him the truth
He is genuinely a good guy and diesn't deserve thisb
If she tells him the truth, he woul have helped her
Unfortunately Zoya is not courageous, plus she let Zoe walk all over her 😑
Thanks Mayur for this lovely feedback
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: blueberry02

Hey,
nice update,loved it
zoya is so helpless...poor her
dey r going 2 india...gosh dont no how zoya wud manage da situation then
i think somewhere asad started suspecting her...
Dont no how long it goes...
Update nxt part soon,
Thanq



Thanks dear for this lovely comment
I am not sure how Zoya is going to manage too
Asad is suspecting...he is even doubting Ayaan as to why he said all this about her
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: noesha

I think this is the moment when he brought her to his home.. where I would have told him the truth.. I think she should have trusted him enough to not take Lilly away from her. I bet he is gonna find out only after they got married right... ufff...

Loving it!


Yup you are right
He'll find out only after marriage
Poor Asad...I feel sorry for him
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

Hey pai πŸ€—
Awesome update as usually πŸ˜†
Awww poor lily bohot ro rai thi πŸ˜”
Asad has been following her mughe tho laga hi tha
Now she will be living with him
So excited
Continue soon 😊



Ha ha yes he was following her
He wanted to see if she really goes to the library or not
Soon they'll get marry 😊
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ksen

Amazing part
Well written
Loved it
Thanks for the pm



Thanks dear
Glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing chapter

Loved reading it😊


Thanks Muskaan 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Awesome update

Zoya must be very careful
Asad was sharp
He caught on Zoe in magazine
And confronted zoya
Though it didn't help zoya
She covered it up quick
Even her visiting his house
N her fear of flying

Just love how she comes up
Something very quickly
It is just hilarious
But how will she deal with going to India
She can't take lily out of the country
Without her real mother



She can't but she will take Lily out of the country
Plus her fear of flying
Let's see how she manages everything
Glad u r enjoying the story even though you have read it already
Hopefully you'll see more changes to the story after they are married πŸ˜ƒ

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