AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142

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Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: asyafreva
Zoya is already falling in love?
But poor her for Asad intends to put up a tough wall...

Update soon...

Zoya should still tell Asad who she really is... In that way he might hate her less?

Asad hates Zoe...he doesn't know anything about Zoya
Zoya should tell him the truth but she won't
Let's see what happens :)

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sasir

@sasir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#202

Awesome..
Feeling bad for zoya..
But she should tell asad the truth...

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Nim

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Posted: 9 years ago

#203

Hey,

Another wonderful story from you. I truly am amazed by your choice of reading. All the stories you post are a treat to read.

Coming to this one, its intriguing from the first chap.

U kno i kept thinkn how Zoe could up n leave so easily, without a backward glance at her infant baby, didnt her heart ache even a little when she walked out of the house with the intentions of marrying another man. Then i realized it definitely was easy for her cox she doesnt own a heart or a conscience. Otherwise no other mother could plan on giving up her baby and that too selling it to the highest bidder. How could i forget, the beating marks on Lily's body. That part honestly broke my heart. That poor baby has to endure the brunt of her mother's actions. She calls herself realistic, well i call her mean & selfish. I honestly hate Zoe so much right from the beginning.

Zoya's love for Lily is heart touching. Not being her real mother and still cares for her well being so deeply that she is willing to do anything for her. Well she truly is her mother. Both the sisters might b indentical but their natures are completelt different. Where Zoe wants to live off of others riches, Zoya believes in earning a respectful living. She puts others interest before hers whereas Zoe is concerned only about herself.

I feel for Asad. He has been put in a challenging situation by his father's request cum order. It must hav been hard for him to cope wid the loss of two of close family members in such a short time. To add to it, his dad seems to hav favoured Ayaan more than him. My heart went out to him when he thought that his father wud hav grieved less if he wud hav been in the accident instead of Ayaan. I feel Asad hasnt got the love of his father, his mother's role remains to b unveiled yet. He is lonely n to kill that feeling, he goes out with random girls. It was heart warming to see his interaction with Lily. Just a glimpse n he was in love with the baby. So easily he accepted her in his life and is willing to adopt her so dat she dsnt have to go thru the harshness of life. I know his father's wish is the main reason but still...

Coming to the preposition he has put in front of Zoya. I dont kno but sumhow i feel that Zoya shud hav told him the truth as here both of them are working with the same intention in mind, that is Lily's well being. I dont think Asad wud hav pulled the child away from her if she had stated the truth instead of pretending to be her twin. She already knew how her sister is. Asad already hates Zoe for her involvement in his bro's death n thinks of her as a greedy woman n seeing how she has treated Lily n wat she intends to do wid her, i think the court wud also provide Zoya the authority to take of her. Anyways now she has dug a hole for herself on her own. Mayb staying together after the wedding, Asad wud see thru the facade she's putting up n get to kno at one point that she's not Zoe, den wat? He is going to hate her as well for lying to him all the while.

Well eagerly waiting to see how it goes on from here. Both of them are equally attracted to the other. Where Asad is experienced in these matters, Zoya is innocent but she really tempts him to react. Hahaha. I like how these two bicker. Lets see for how long Asad stays away from her, like she said, he's a dead man, its not gonna b easy to avoid her.

Update soon. I wish u cud update 2 chaps at a tym. Seriously the waiting part is not my thing.

Tc.

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#204

Awesome updates

Glad u made these changes

Just love them

And this suits asya better

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: msingh27
Awesome update. .they are going to be married. ..can't wait but am kinda scared for zoya...this will not turn out good for her...she is totally screwed. Zow will come back to her for money..thats for sure.Not liking the fact that she is hiding the truth from asad. This will totally hinder their love life.. ...hope when he finds out the truth, he accepts her...wishful thinking...very interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter
Thank u for the PM

Thanks dear for the lovely comment 😊
Glad u r enjoying it
Yes, Zoya should have told the truth
And yes, Zoe is surely going to come back 😆
Asad will be hurt and I don't blame him 😕
Will update soon

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: Angels_Ring
nice part

Thanks 😊

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: raspi
it was too good bt plzz give an epilogue fr Broken souls n tnxx fr pm

Thank you 😊
Sorry dear there is no epilogue for that story in the book 😕

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#208

Yes

Do not fall in love with Asad Ahmed Khan

But we know what happens

😉🤣

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: chichi220
Very exciting story

Thanks 😃

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: Applef
Awesome update..
Zoya's inner turmoil is increasing day by day..
Asad was so easy with baby..
Wish asad could find out zoya's identity soon..
And see the love she had for her niece..

Thanks dear 😃
I am so glad u liked it
I wish Asad could find the truth soon too 😕