AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142 - Page 17

Hey Pia...are you still in vacation...happy holidays to you dear...I really hate Zoe hurting a baby ...so cruel she will learn her lesson...I am more worried about Zoya she is entangling herself in a web of lies for Lily...but when Asad comes to know that she is not her mother anyway she will loose all her rights on Lily...so why not tell him now...

Originally posted by: KABHIrabab786

I'm in love with this story
Commenting on both chaps asad meeting zoya n misunderstanding her as Zoe zoya doesn't correct him loved the part were he holds lily
For some reason more than Zoe.I hate ayan if he was committed y did he fall in d trap typival man never see their own fault
Poor zoya is stuck in this whole issue
Asad propose her for a paper marriage
I really loved their talk about not consummating after marriage their bet hahah let's see how far will asad control himself
Stupid zoya told Zoe about this Zoe is so selfish n cunning n greedy all she wants is money
Well I want to read more but no update tomorrow
Have a great journey enjoy

Both Zoe and Ayaan are at fault
Ayaan did regret for what he did...he paid the price too...he not only ended up killing himself but humeira too
Zoya is surely stuck in a bad situation now
Let's see what happens...first they need to get marry 😆 😉
Will update soon

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Interesting..

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: MayurChan

<font color="#993399" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Interesting and Well written part Pia..👏</font>

Thanks Mayur 😊

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing chapter

And for your question i had read this story long back due to which i had to read 2 chapters to get reminded of it😉

As u said their were surely things which did not suite well in tue story and i am really looking forward to know how u make the changes to them

Please continue soon

P.S. have a safe journey to vegas😊

Thanks Muskaan...I had awesome time in Vegas
I made one change in ch 2
Zoe found out Farhan doesn't have that much money as Asad
But she still asks Zoya to marry Asad while she goes with Farhan
This didn't make any sense...Zoe wanted a rich husband then once Zoya told her Asad is ready to marry her thinking she is Zoe...why didn't Zoe come back and marry Asad herself
So like this there were many things in this story and one major thing that put me off
But overall the story line was good
I will try my best to make it more indian way which will suit AsYa a lot 😃

Originally posted by: shailu123

Awesome update pai totally love it yaar 👍🏼
AsYa's conversation is so intense and challenging ❤️
Zoe is really residuals hate her 😡
Ur going pai 😔 will miss this one in one day 😔
But anyway enjoy your self there 🤗

Thanks Shailu 😊
Glad u liked this update
Yes, Zoe is such a witch 😡
I had fun in Vegas and I missed you guys too 🤗
Will update soon

Originally posted by: asyafreva

Poor Asad for being cheated and poor Zoya for giving away her life just because of her twin who is a complete waste...

I hope she realises her mistakes... Zoe needs to be given a reality check...

Right now Zoya is only thinking about Lily.
But I feel bad for Asad...he is being cheated :(
Zoya will get in a big mess
Will update soon

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

Nice

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Liked the way Asad & Zoya talk
Zoe was totally crazy. She didn't realise what she is doing
Waiting to see what happens next
Thanks for pm
Have a safe journey & enjoy.

Thank you for this lovely comment 😊
I am glad u liked this update
I had fun in Vegas 😃
Will update soon

Originally posted by: jaanu013

Interesting part..

</div>asya conversation was intense ..liked it<div>

zoe..such a greedy person..

Thank you 😊
I'm glad u liked it