AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1011

wonderful update again
the sad thing is that a beautiful story ends

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1012

tyt hugs Pia🤗

Man u made me wait so long

see I saw ur PM & came running 2 read😆

Coming 2 updt its fantastic

I was happy that Zoya aleast a nice frnd in her life she could turn to, Khushi was really sweet & supporting frnd😊

I was shocked when Zoe came I thought it would b Asad

That evil bitch wanted 2 take Zoya's place after killing her...still can't believe they r sisters & that 2 twins 😵

Khair I was relieved when our Hero reached on time 2 save his beloved

There long awaited confession was really heart warming 😛

Pia this story was really heart warming gave me that fussy feeling I just loved & enjoyed reading it

Can we get an epilogue wid a proper wedding, some romance & some real cute parenting scene wid Lily cuz I feel we didn't had any proper wala scene there btw d trio now that they r family in real😳

Pia now which new story is coming nxt I want daily updts this time so chose accordingly cuz I realised wid this 1 suspense is so killing😆

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

@MOnkEy_rAngEr

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#1013

Wonderful story

Zoe tried to strangle zoya to death

Asad reached in time to save her

Asya confessed to each other

Amazing

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1014

Already the last one..😭

This was a very special story..

I really liked it...

Well the original title seemed quite different...

The end was just perfect..

The way they confessed their love,their hurt, their feelings of being apart everything was just perfect.

Happy Zoe got an excellent punishment.

I need a happy epilogue

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1015

Nice update
Zoya reached Sydney. Both were missing each other. Liked her talk with khushi. Zoe tried to kill her sister to take her place but Asad reached there on time. Finally everything between them sorted it out. Thanks for presenting wonderful story & pm

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1016

wonderful update

loved it

perfect ending

thanks for the pm

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1017

A Beautiful Story and A Beautiful End
Loved it so so so so sooo Much ❤️
Come back soon with a new story 😊

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mummyoftwo

@mummyoftwo

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1018

Thank u for the pm.

Why a lovely end!! Amazing update and beautiful reunion and heart to heart talk.

Looking forward to ur next story!

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1019

Awesome..
Last chapter...
Nooo...
Plzzz...
Plzzz...
Plzzz...
Continue it...
Or at least give epilogue...
U r an awesome writer...
I Don't wanna give it up without a try...
Plzzz...
Can't u continue it...
Not much more at least two more chapters...
Plzzz consider it...

Coming to update that Zoe ...can anyone stoop so low than her...no
Such a creepy creature..
Glad that asad saved zoya...
N she got punishment...
Finally everything is cleared...
I missed lilly...here...