#2 Asya FF- dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein ana part 7 on pg16 13/4

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Amina...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Beautiful Update ...!!!
Loved It Sooo Much ...!!!

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Awesome update sue
Film watching scene reminded them the reality of life. Both were emotional. Ayaan & humeira tried to make them normal & they were successful. Ohh Zoya foot broke. Asad was worried for her as his fear came in front of his eyes. He didn't want to attend college. Zoya told him to attend. Last scene was nice. He teased her & left. Waiting for Zoya reaction. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm in advance

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anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Very nice update

So someone is starting to get some feelings for their partner I believe

He can't think of losing zoya in his life

His mother is on the thin list losing zoya would break him

So she is hurt due to a cockroach 😆

Now she might miss college and exams

Wonder what he will do for her as he grabbed her schedule

Continue soon

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Vaishali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Okay so i am not supposed to comment as we both are the owner.

But the moment i read the part you sent me for proof read i decided to comment because i wanted to confess somethings.

I loved the update sue. I wanted to read more and more.

And reading this updated my interest in asya came back (not fully) but ya it came back. I read aishu's story also.

I just love you yar for writing such amazing parts.

Love you girl. 🤗

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Vaishali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

And i also decided ki ab jo bhi ho agar mujhe kisi ka bhi(phir vo chahe mera hi kyu na hi) updare pasand aya i will defo comment for it.

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ameena671

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

wow excellent update loved it can't wait for next part thank you for pm.

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ksen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Wonderful part
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Hello Again Sue and also gayab Vaishu...😊

Hope U both are doing dhamaal in your lives...even if net is not supporting U still I wish tum dono aache hoo...😆

Well coming to the Update...

Well it was really good...some thing is changing between ASYA...as slowly slowly they are becoming each others strength which they will surely need if anything to go by your note at the end..😡😕

That movie scene part how Asad got emotional and Zoya knew what he was thinking about...was such a good scene..

Liked reading this part..

Continue soonish..😃