AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls # 2 ~ Ch 28(Final) Updated on Pg. 71 - Page 56

Originally posted by: -ovi-

awesome update

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: iluvarmaanmalik

Oh I love you. It was awsome. And thank you for starting that new story already!👍🏼👏

Thank you 😊
Glad u liked it

Originally posted by: MayurChan

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Piaa..😊</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Thank You for sharing this Amazing story with us...👏</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Coming to the last part...well one of the most beautiful confession part I have read on this forum...very emotional and touching indeed...👏⭐️</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Credit to the writer and to You too for writing and sharing this with us..👍🏼</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Asad's confession was just the best and righteous thing which Zoya actually deserved...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">LOVED IT...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Continue soon with more stories...as I can see you have already started one...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">But I was thinking in that other book of Rehaan and khushi's ASYA must have been mentioned their na so by that can't you come up with a epilogue or a completely new update for a epilogue of ASYA and maybe LILY..😳</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Just an idea...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Take care.😃</font>

Hey Mayur, thanks for reading and always appreciating 😃
Glad u liked this story...last chapter was the best
Asad's confession was mindblowing 😊
Khushi was funny 😆
I have not read that other book.
I am sure they must have mentioned some things about AsYa in there
If I read the book, I will surely post it 😃
Thanks again Mayur for this lovely comment :)

Originally posted by: Amina...

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL ENDING
EVERYTHING ABOUT IT IS SO BEAUTIFUL
I WANNA READ MORE OF IT ...!!!
PLZ WRITE AN EPILOGUE IF YOU CAN ... PLZ PLZ PLZ😃

Wow! What a lovely comment 😃
Glad to know you like the story so much
Oh dear the book did't have an epilogue otherwise I would have post it 😕

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

I hadnt realized that the story was coming to an end. Damnn! I would so miss this story.

I loved the proposal scene. Beautiful. And I so am reading this book as soon as I get some free time. Will catch you on the next story of yours.

Much Love!

I am happy to know you liked the story just as much as I liked it 😃
Last chapter was the best
Confession was mindblowing 😳
AsYa finally got their happiness

Originally posted by: shailu123

wow pai really its an awesome story yaar Love it🤗

Zoya get her happily ever after with Asad

and they are going to marry🥳

its ur first biggest story Love it👏

Yes it is Shailu
This story was really long
I am glad everyone enjoyed reading it
Thanks dear for reading 😊

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Zoya came out from coma & wanted to meet Asad only. Confession & proposal was wonderful. Perfect ending.
Thanks for pm

Awww thank you 😊
I am so glad u liked it

Originally posted by: jas91

awe Pia that was d cutest proposal😛

u know what I think this story was a proper balance

Start was spectacular in mid it was a bit thanda & in d end it again gives u that feels

I m sure u'll know what I mean cuz I m sure u must have read this story many times b4 converting it on Asya😉

SO Zoya was in Comafor 4 days awe what must have been Asad's halat😳

I was shocked when she woke & no1 was there 4 her

but I m happy Zoe was still hopeful & didn't left her trust

than came Asad all decked up wid his frnds 2 propose his beloved

& d proposal was truly mindblowing any1 would have send seeing Asad bare his soul out 2 u❤️

Khushi was super hilarious character in d last 2 parts enjoyed her scene😆

& its good the 3 got their due punishment😈

Overall I really enjoyed this 1 Pia

Thanks 4 sharing this beautiful story🤗

Wow ! Such a lovely comment Jas 😃
Glad u liked this story :)

Originally posted by: jas91

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Oh sorry Pia actually I was just talking about d twist & yes even I also doesn't wished a guy 2 accept a girl only cuz she's pregnant wid his baby. Its only now that u told I realised what that scenario might have meant I was just thinking about d comic scene that must have come out 😆Forgive me 4 not thinking it like that.

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<em>Lol new story as reward yeh gift toh sabko mila hai Pia 🤣

Don't worry Jas, I know what you mean
I was just sharing be my pov.

Unres pg71