AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls # 2 ~ Ch 28(Final) Updated on Pg. 71

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Fatema

@DoremonLove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#521

Its over 😭 😭
Awesome chapter of an awesome story
Zoya waking up n not finding asad still confident that he would never leave her
Asads proposal was just awww
Wish there was more but I love the happy ending 😭
Can't we get an epilogue plj
Now I'm going to jump to ur other story 😆

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iluvarmaanmalik

@iluvarmaanmalik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#522

Oh I love you. It was awsome. And thank you for starting that new story already! 👍🏼👏

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#523

Piaa..😊

Thank You for sharing this Amazing story with us...👏

Coming to the last part...well one of the most beautiful confession part I have read on this forum...very emotional and touching indeed...👏⭐️

Credit to the writer and to You too for writing and sharing this with us..👍🏼

Asad's confession was just the best and righteous thing which Zoya actually deserved...

LOVED IT...

Continue soon with more stories...as I can see you have already started one...

But I was thinking in that other book of Rehaan and khushi's ASYA must have been mentioned their na so by that can't you come up with a epilogue or a completely new update for a epilogue of ASYA and maybe LILY..😳

Just an idea...

Take care.😃

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Amina...

@Amina...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#524

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL ENDING
EVERYTHING ABOUT IT IS SO BEAUTIFUL
I WANNA READ MORE OF IT ...!!!
PLZ WRITE AN EPILOGUE IF YOU CAN ... PLZ PLZ PLZ 😃

Edited by Amina... - 9 years ago

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#525

I hadnt realized that the story was coming to an end. Damnn! I would so miss this story.

I loved the proposal scene. Beautiful. And I so am reading this book as soon as I get some free time. Will catch you on the next story of yours.

Much Love!

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#526

wow pai really its an awesome story yaar Love it🤗

Zoya get her happily ever after with Asad

and they are going to marry 🥳

its ur first biggest story Love it 👏

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#527

Awesome update
Zoya came out from coma & wanted to meet Asad only. Confession & proposal was wonderful. Perfect ending.
Thanks for pm

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#528

awe Pia that was d cutest proposal😛

u know what I think this story was a proper balance

Start was spectacular in mid it was a bit thanda & in d end it again gives u that feels

I m sure u'll know what I mean cuz I m sure u must have read this story many times b4 converting it on Asya😉

SO Zoya was in Coma for 4 days awe what must have been Asad's halat😳

I was shocked when she woke & no1 was there 4 her

but I m happy Zoe was still hopeful & didn't left her trust

than came Asad all decked up wid his frnds 2 propose his beloved

& d proposal was truly mindblowing any1 would have send seeing Asad bare his soul out 2 u❤️

Khushi was super hilarious character in d last 2 parts enjoyed her scene😆

& its good the 3 got their due punishment😈

Overall I really enjoyed this 1 Pia

Thanks 4 sharing this beautiful story🤗

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: iluvasya

Ha ha I'm glad Zoya is not pregnant. I hate when a guy agree to marry the girl and realise his feelings after she gets pregnant. Basically he's agreeing because he feels responsible toward the baby and not because he has truly realised his feelings.

At least now he understood what Zoya is for him. He truly sees a soulmate in her.

You are right...old Asad would've killed the trio already
But now he has learned to control his anger
He understands he needs to be there for Zoya

Buggies to you too Jas and yes you do deserve a reward for being regular this time.
My new story is your reward 😆

Oh sorry Pia actually I was just talking about d twist & yes even I also doesn't wished a guy 2 accept a girl only cuz she's pregnant wid his baby. Its only now that u told I realised what that scenario might have meant I was just thinking about d comic scene that must have come out 😆 Forgive me 4 not thinking it like that.

Lol new story as reward yeh gift toh sabko mila hai Pia

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crazedfan19

@crazedfan19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#530

what a beautiful ending to an amazing story!! Asad truly realized Zoya's worth and overcame his fear of loosing everything. Zoya has a beautiful family to call her own and amazing whiskey sisters!!!!! lol that was so cute!!! and you started another story which I am elated about!! thank you for the PMs. Love your stories!!!👏

Aisha