AsYa FS 'Rishte Kuch Adhoore Se' Last Part Page 123 COMPLETE

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#721

Nice part
Thnx for d pm
T.c

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Annie

@_Annie_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#722

Starting was sooo Haseeennn aur end tak tumne dil hi tod dia🥺

AsYa moments were a treat to read...and the whole dialogue of Asad to Dilshad literally had me in tears. Hands down Asshii, beautifully written <3

But end ke 4-5 paragraphs bohot rushed thay...I mean, if it was the main crux of story tou thora sa elaboration was needed, just my thoughts, No offence. :)

I can completely understand how just one scene can inspire us to write a whole series...can totally relate to it :) And this was one heart-touching scene you chose :)👍🏼

Meri baat ka bura mat maanna, Asshii pie😳it was just my thought. Take care...Lots of loveee 🤗

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
RES fr all iske thread pe pehli bar kr ri hu
forgive me agar bhul jau kisiko agar
Ressy wala rasila ressy fr jas,aroo,affu,yum,iska bf sara,saima di,choco,nims,ainnu,tehs,mayur,asif bhaijaan,anopama di,nilu,sree,nayu,abi,sum,binshi'dipti,shama,shailu,aju i am sure bhuli to hu kisiko
yad ni IBP wale b sbka res meko no pta koun koun shamil h

Thank You so much for the RES Sue..😊

Coming to the update...

Well it was interesting...but yes...akhir inko alag karna hota hee hai toh inke happy moments batate hee kyun hoo..😆

But as Annie aslo mentioned U choose one of the most pain yet well acted scene of ASYA...for this INSPIRATION..👏

Liked this part..

Continue soonish..

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#724

I loved this scene soo much
Awesome portrayal of it
Superb
Loved it

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#725

annie i totally agree yaar

mene sab sort out kar ke ek dum se train pakad li par yaar aisy drag horaha tha

i mean meko actual scene pe focus karna tha

next time i'll be careful

and haan meko koi bura nahi laga in fact i like it how u told me warna meko apni mistake pata na chalti

love u sweetu 🤗

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#726

Anniieee

tu online hai

aaj mera dill 🥺

mene suna hai Kapoor n Sons mai Fawad is a gay 😭 😭 😭 😭

mera to aaj happy day tha

par abhi 💔

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Annie

@_Annie_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: AkaiBara
annie i totally agree yaar
mene sab sort out kar ke ek dum se train pakad li par yaar aisy drag horaha tha

i mean meko actual scene pe focus karna tha

next time i'll be careful

and haan meko koi bura nahi laga in fact i like it how u told me warna meko apni mistake pata na chalti

love u sweetu 🤗

Koi nai yaar...writers bhi insaan hote hain. Mere sath tou aise scenes hote rehte hai😆😆

Glad that I could be of some help😳

Love you more Ashii Pieee 🤗

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Annie

@_Annie_

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#728

Originally posted by: AkaiBara
Anniieee
tu online hai

aaj mera dill 🥺

mene suna hai Kapoor n Sons mai Fawad is a gay 😭 😭 😭 😭

mera to aaj happy day tha

par abhi 💔

Ji han...mein online hun, tu bhi online hai😳😆

OMG...Reallyyy??😲😲 Nahiii🥺

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: _Annie_

Koi nai yaar...writers bhi insaan hote hain. Mere sath tou aise scenes hote rehte hai😆😆

Glad that I could be of some help😳

Love you more Ashii Pieee 🤗

haan akhir hum insaan hain 😆

love u zaida wala 🤗