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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazz2010

I have no words to describe your words
It is just beautiful
Love to read about sahil after so long
I feel so emotional right now
Thank u soo much for this wonderful work

With love
Ramya


Thank you so much for the love, Ramya. Happy to know you enjoyed it. 🤗 Even I felt a bit emotional while thinking of what it could have been.. They would be wonderful parents.. Once again, thank you..❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: darkice7_12

Beautiful, Mahwash!

This couple . . . you gave SaHil a chance to grow and mature together. Thank you for giving us a glimpse of them as parents and their little family. How great was Aahil as the strict father and Sanam as the soft mother? Although, I did think that it would be the other way around. 😆

Aahil inhaled a deep breathe. "Our children think of me as a brave man who fought the whole world.. When the truth is all I really did was to reach out for the one person who made me brave all along.. You."

And these lines . . . this is what makes Aahil . . . Aahil. He never truly realized his worth, did he? Even when he fell in love and bettered himself . . .all that hard work to change and mature . . . he laid all the credit at her feet.

Beautiful story. 👍🏼 Had great fun reading this OS. Keep writing more!


I actually became a bit emotional while reading your review. You are such an amazing writer/reader yourself. Feeling so humbled that you loved it. ❤️

Yeah.. It probably would be the other way around. 😆 Like I said in one of the above comments, the last part is something which just crossed my mind and I penned it down, because it was so profound for me.. This is indeed the Aahil we all know.

I will try to come up with a few more stories, but it might take some time.. But will def try..

Thank you once again for all the love.. You always manage to make me smile and kind of make me proud of my work.. 😳🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lovesahil

SaHil😭This was really sweet...

SaHil, Zaid and laiba...I love these names...
Aahil definitely didn't become his father. Why couldn't Gul Khan use this ending for Sahil😭.
All the Flasbacks, they just seem so captivating about how SaHil grew closer together and love never died off...

Thank you mahwash... It was really nice to read something different once in a while...
Do write more😉


I'm touched you liked the story and the names. Yes, why couldn't Gul show us this kind of ending? That's why we have ff to grant our wishes and thoughts. Thank you for all the love. You are indeed a wonderful reader. 🤗 I will try to keep writing but for now, I will focus on ending "Marked As His" for now.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was seriously an amazing piece of writing. I miss SaHil. And I really feel sad thinking about their incomplete journey. Anyways enjoyed reading it mwaish.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww, I'm glad you enjoyed the piece, Naffs ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww mahn! That was surreal, in all the senses my darling amazing writer! That was just the fluff I wanted to read! ⭐️ I mean, I come after so many days( don't ask, been busy in shifting and life happens everytime lol) 😛
But this! This bought tears of happiness, joy and I felt a warmth creeping inside my heart, reading this! Thank you for this gorgeous piece of writing my maniac! Your the best, you know it, but still! ❤️

Everything from the names of those cute little munchkins they had, to the story telling, to the little nods they gave and how they reacted! It was almost like reading their story. I felt their glimpses washing away in front of my eyes, literally!

And the favorite part? When their kid asked HIM, about, that you were that guy only to fight for his love and against all who were against, and he wanted to be just like him! That! ❤️ It took my heart away, I swear!

Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for this amazing, splendid piece!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil

Awww mahn! That was surreal, in all the senses my darling amazing writer! That was just the fluff I wanted to read! ⭐️ I mean, I come after so many days( don't ask, been busy in shifting and life happens everytime lol) 😛

OMG! I just came across your comment right now, after such a long time. Seems like, I have been busy too. 😆 Thank you Prags! You already know how much your words and what the presence of you gives me. ❤️ I really mean it. Thank you so much for all the kindness and love.

But this! This bought tears of happiness, joy and I felt a warmth creeping inside my heart, reading this! Thank you for this gorgeous piece of writing my maniac! Your the best, you know it, but still! ❤️

YOU are the best! When i posted this, I really wanted to show something happiness related for SaHil. And honestly, I am so glad that I did, because of all the beautiful readers had read it.

Everything from the names of those cute little munchkins they had, to the story telling, to the little nods they gave and how they reacted! It was almost like reading their story. I felt their glimpses washing away in front of my eyes, literally!

Aww.. You're making me blush. Seriously I cannot thank you enough of encouraging me so much. I feel so blessed. <3 Thank you, Prags. You are the best as always and once again, feel honored that you read it.

And the favorite part? When their kid asked HIM, about, that you were that guy only to fight for his love and against all who were against, and he wanted to be just like him! That! ❤️ It took my heart away, I swear!

Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for this amazing, splendid piece!

I swear, you just said THE favorite scene of mine too!! I cannot even describe what I felt while typing the words.. The scenario just came into my mind and I just had to pen it down. Trust me, it took my heart away as well.

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