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Wait wait... so you thought you could fool us by saying It's not the best piece I have written??? That won't work mahu 😉

The title, the banner... absolutely perfect!!! 👏 I'm... well... lost for words

Hayeee!! Sahil, Zaid & Laiba... Such beautiful names you've chosen ❤️

And as usual Lateef is so dramatic... I loved how Sahil is actually a copy of Aahil when it comes to groaning Lateef...' I could totally visualize ARI there... 😆 Then Zaid is so much like Sanam when it comes to judging people... I remember once Dilshad explained the same thing to her... "We should never be so quick to judge others. It isn't the right thing to do." 😳

Aww... Lateef actually narrated the story to the kids... & that too so sweetly, so subtle you've made it... How Aahil became arrogant; then he was sort of besotted when he met Sanam... And how they stood united against the world... They deserved so much better

Those flashbacks... I must say you did it again!! The perfect timing for each of those sweet memories to be replayed!! 👏 And the nok-jhok of SaHil on dressing up their kids is too cute... 😆 Zaid is so adamant for the black shirt there 😛

And they actually miss SeHan...😔 Aah!! I felt so over-whelmed... And how wonderfully SaHil handled Zaid there... Aahil is the stern yet so loving father... Yes, he would surely have been like that given the chance ❤️

The last part... well... I might end up quoting the whole thing as well...

Aahil: "Our children think of me as a brave man who fought the whole world.. When the truth is all I really did was to reach out for the one person who made me brave all along.. You."

Sanam: "In my heart you are brave. - Brave enough to accept yourself just the way you are.. Isn't it right, Jaan?"

Aahil: "Thank you. For making me the man I am today... Or else I would have lived a very lonely life and perhaps remained to be the cold hearted man I once was."

You've just penned another one of the perfect endings SaHil could have gotten... It's beautiful really... loved reading it... 👏

Lots of love your way 🤗

Please do write more

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Beautiful dear

Loved it to the core

Love the title you gave to it. This was indeed a beautiful dream which i am sure each sahil fan had seen atleast once. To see them with their children

Their love deserved so much more

Anyways, this was seriously flawless and it actually brought back thousands of memories

Amazing dear

😊

Originally posted by: innocentangel4u

Wait wait... so you thought you could fool us by saying It's not the best piece I have written??? That won't work mahu 😉

Okay.. I think I spent like 10 minutes deciding which color to use so I could reply.. Anyways.. - Damn! I thought I could. Oh well.. 😆 No, seriously, I had penned this few months ago, so I really did think it wasn't that special.. But reading your incredible review has really blown me away. 😳

The title, the banner... absolutely perfect!!! 👏 I'm... well... lost for words

Hayeee!! Sahil, Zaid & Laiba... Such beautiful names you've chosen ❤️

Aww. I'm so glad you loved it. Trust me, I enjoyed picking the names. I wanted to name their first child Sahil, because of obvious reasons.. I have to admit, I did get a bit teary dreaming about their life together.. Oh, have I told you how much I absolutely love your reviews. They are GOLD to me. YOU are gold..

And as usual Lateef is so dramatic... I loved how Sahil is actually a copy of Aahil when it comes to groaning Lateef...' I could totally visualize ARI there... 😆 Then Zaid is so much like Sanam when it comes to judging people... I remember once Dilshad explained the same thing to her... "We should never be so quick to judge others. It isn't the right thing to do." 😳

Aww... Lateef actually narrated the story to the kids... & that too so sweetly, so subtle you've made it... How Aahil became arrogant; then he was sort of besotted when he met Sanam... And how they stood united against the world... They deserved so much better

I love dramatic-Lateef 😆 He was so fun writing.. So happy that you thought the narration was well done, because I kind of had a few problems with it how to tell the story. Yes, Aahil's story is so close to me. The transformation is one of the best moments in QH for me.. KV man.. He did a splendid job.

Those flashbacks... I must say you did it again!! The perfect timing for each of those sweet memories to be replayed!! 👏 And the nok-jhok of SaHil on dressing up their kids is too cute... 😆 Zaid is so adamant for the black shirt there 😛

And they actually miss SeHan...😔 Aah!! I felt so over-whelmed... And how wonderfully SaHil handled Zaid there... Aahil is the stern yet so loving father... Yes, he would surely have been like that given the chance ❤️

I loved writing Zaid and the kind of look he would wear while choosing the shirt, really cracks me up. Poor Aahil.. 😆 Once again, thank you for all the love. I am so humbled. No matter what I write, I'm always nervous and humbled enough that you guys take time to read comment too. Especially you.. You always manage to create this ongoing smile on my face and kind of remind me that whatever I am doing, is.. right.. You get me? 😳😆

The last part... well... I might end up quoting the whole thing as well...

Aahil: "Our children think of me as a brave man who fought the whole world.. When the truth is all I really did was to reach out for the one person who made me brave all along.. You."

Sanam: "In my heart you are brave. - Brave enough to accept yourself just the way you are.. Isn't it right, Jaan?"

Aahil: "Thank you. For making me the man I am today... Or else I would have lived a very lonely life and perhaps remained to be the cold hearted man I once was."

You've just penned another one of the perfect endings SaHil could have gotten... It's beautiful really... loved reading it... 👏

Lots of love your way 🤗

Please do write more

You wouldn't believe this, but the very last part was something which just came into my mind 10 minutes before I decided to post the story.. And as you said.. This is my favorite part as well.. I love how these two balance each other's love and insecurities. That's what love is all about.

Honestly, I don't even know what to say here.. All I can say is thank you so much for all the love. I appreciate every and each word you have said. ❤️ I'm sending you so much love your way too. You are one amazing reader! 🤗

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Aftr a very lng time i read sahil os.thank u.
A very scener peaceful & beautiful updt.
Thy deserve happy life with thr kids whicg thy dreamd 2gethr.
I love it.