AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#701

Does n't asad khnow tht she ws virgin hehe 😳

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#702

Awesome update 👍🏼
Love Asya romantic moments 😳
Zoya set on fire 😲 that so horrible😭
Zoya don't want to be with another guy but asad
But asad is not ready for relationship😔
Continue soon 😊

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niza fazal

@nizahairu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#703

Oh zoya...I am very sad for ur past
Nice update
Azad plz accept her

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-ovi-

@-ovi-

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#704

awesome update zoya's past was sad hope happiness comes her way thanks for the pm

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#705

Oh god.. zoya's past was horrible. . No one deserves such a treatment irrespective of how bad they are.. nd zoya was just rude nothing more.. she didn't really harm ppl..! Whoever did that wouldnot be spared by asad if he comes to know of him..
Loved how asad made love to zoya and wasn't disgusted with her scars . But on the other hand he had hurt her by saying to make her commit to someone else...
Zoya felt so bad by what asad said..
hope asad realises that he wants zoya for her life..
this is superb .! I'm loving it. .:)

And yes its ok if you update a little late..:)
Take your time.. I know life gets busy..! :)
We love this story and would be waiting fir each update with same eagerness. .:)

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#706

My god Zoya had 2 face that

I was badly shaken when I read it

that was horrible who could have done that

Does Zoe suspects her father cuz she didn't gave a name

after knowing both there past I'll say both had d worst than 1 can think

But they deserve 2 b wid each other cuz they really r soulmates

btw morning part was passionate but loved d confrontation in d end & Zoe asking him out😆

Hugs Pia another brilliant part it was👏

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#707

Nice update
Zoya past was scary. Somebody throw gasoline on her. Asad wanted to know the name but she handled him. Curious to know what happened next. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

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ayat

@ayat20

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#708

Felt bad for zoya

Nice part

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#709

U res

Loved it

Aww so finally Asya comes together but only with hands and lips

Me boy was it intense

He is such a tease he torture her and then he made her give in and let her know the ground rules

Love when he is in the moment with her how he says her name and not endearments

So finally he sees her scar and what he did next is so sweet

And he called her a treasure and he asks her never to change

So wonder from her akwardness if he figures she is a virgin

So he learns what happens to her he is pissed ready to find the person and make them pay

So zoya learned asad plans for her she is pissed

She is ready to put him out

He tries to talk to her but she is not willing to listen

So she questions him he knows he would never cheat her

But still he can't be what she wants

He never wanted someone like he wants her

He keeps wanting more and keeps coming back to learn more

Solve the puzzle as he says

Hopes Asad realizes soon she is what he wants forever

Edited by anopama - 9 years ago

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crazedfan19

@crazedfan19

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#710

phew, I feel like I just got a roller coaster ride after reading that update! Zoya needs to know no matter what she did, she did not deserve that. I am actually looking forward to Asad's looking for a guy for Zoya, maybe this way he will realize his feelings and get over his I am not marriage material rant. Looking forward to the next part. thanks for the pm!

Aisha