AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 20

Originally posted by: fatima30

Super update
Asya are fun to read
I love how Asad wants to help and protect Zoya
It's super sweet

Thanks Fatima
Glad u liked it 😃

Originally posted by: cutie15

Asad and zoya are awesome. . I loved the sarcastic remarks and all the bickerings they do..:)
This is so much fun to read.. I'm loving it..
I really couldn't stop laughing when zoya saidshe considers asad as her brother. .. 😆
Awesome update...:)

I am glad to know that this chapter made you laugh 😃
Will update soon

Originally posted by: blueberry02

Hahaha...asad,a brother 2 zoya
dat was really funny,
only zoya can come up with things like dat,
i want 2 ask a question...has zoya completed her education?
She is mad seeing asad wid some other girl...i agree wid asad here...it is jealosy
as usual amazing part
thanq

Both have hots for each other but don't want to admit
Glad this chapter made you laugh
Will update soon :)

Originally posted by: ayat20

Superb update

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

I'm loving this more and more now..

Asad as her brother🤣

It was thoughtful of Asad to set up a trust fund for her..

He is falling harder for sure..

But I'm glad Zoya is playing tough too..

Or else he wouldn't realize his true feelings...

I so love their bickering so and their convos...

How many parts does this story have?

Oh this story has 26 chapters and we are only on the 4th chapter right now
So long way to go
Asad if falling hard for her...Zoya likes him too 😳
Let's see how and when they'll admit 😃
Glad to know this chapter brought a smile on your face 😃

Originally posted by: KABHIrabab786

Awesome update dear
Asad couldn't just get zoya out of his mind
Zoya is so cute he first shuu him away but at last she didn't like asad with other girl
Continue soon

Thanks for reading 😊
Glad u liked it 😃

Originally posted by: noesha

LOL!

Poor Asad. Zoya already broke him. He doesnt get affected by a beautiful woman anymore and he starts to tremble when Zoya hugs him hahaha!

Serves him good.

So zoya is homeless and no one is willing to help her.. Doesnt she have anymore family? Like no one at all to help her? Its pretty hard to imagine a superrich guy to fall for a girl like that.. But thats also the beauty of the story I guess..

Loving it!

xoxo

I don't think Asad is in love with Zoya right now...he's infatuated by her...she's this mystery he wants to solve. Zoya doesn't have any family who can help her.

Rich boy falling in love with a poor girl 😳 makes a good fiction 😊

Glad to know you liked this chapter :)

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

1awsm

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: MayurChan

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hey Pia..😊</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">This part was very very good and entertaining in a way...👏</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Now we can see that Asad is getting involved in Zoya too much for his own good...and I think it is good for him that in a way his own bad habits are like getting away from him😆</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">ASYA😳part was very good and funny...I am liking the fact that both have a clear liking and somewhat desire for eachother but the don't want to get into things which they might regret doing it to each other...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hahahaha😆at the end Zoya jealous of that girl...seriously Asad😡😆ko apne flirty ways and ONE NIGHT STAND KING ka tag chodhdena chaiyeh...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Liked this part ⭐️</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Continue soon😃</font>

Hi Mayur,

So glad to know you enjoyed this chapter so much.

Zoya calling Asad her brother was one of the most hilarious moment 😆

Asad is a goner...he's falling hard for her but won't admit easily
Zoya wants a fairytale happily ever after and She know Asad is a wrong guy for that
So she won't give in that eadily also

I hope you enjoy rest of the chapters too 😃