AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128

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Aashka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Just because she couldn't repay the loan, everyone is so mean to her?

Like seriously.. if I was in her place I would have not borne such insults...

Firstly they are not ready to offer her help by employing her and then they wish to demean her!

Feel horrid for her condition...

Asad is slowly warming up to her?

Didn't quite get the part about him visiting in holidays...

Update soon...

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Very Good part Pia.
I don't know...if ever i have come across something as this helpless and in need character ever in the forum...after reading Zoya.?
And is Asad really making her pay a debt for just a piece of pie.?
Little confused here..
But a really good update.
Continue soon.

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KeyaHira2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Damn Zoya

Just Damn

Lol

🤣

They both wanna fight the attraction but can't

If I was Zoya I would've totally acted like that

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Nice update
Asad wanted to know Zoya childhood. I wanted to know as well why everyone in town hated her. Asad & Zoya scene was nice. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani
👏

Thank you so much dear..

U write so well

Thank you
And of course the credit for the writing goes to the author of this book :)

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani
Yay m first

Thank you so much 4 d update...

Lovd it...I lik ths playboy asad nd ice queen zoya

Thank you 😊

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: kobeb
Awesome update, I'm liking this story!! Pls continue soon :)

Thanks...I am really glad to know you are liking this story :)

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Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh
Ohh!! I love this story
Sorry for not commenting earlier
Its beautiful!!

Thank you
Really glad to hear that you are liking the story 😃

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
beautiful stry...
like it.cnt soon

Thanks 😊

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Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: KABHIrabab786
Hey dear lovely chapter
Zoya doesnt know gardening n was going to library to Learn about it
That encounter with akram she has been evil to almost whole town seems nobody likes her
Asad n zoyas part was cute he's so curious about her childhood me too
Continue soon

She was a bully and made fun of everyone
Hurt everyone's feelings
This was her crime and one day she stopped doing it
Even though she has changed, still no one wants to forgive her
She can move but doesn't want to because she really want these people to forgive her
Will update soon