Mine; Always & Forever. An AsYa ff. Chapter 13 updated on pg 86.

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Res for Sis, Choco, CBP & All my friends.

Huggies Nimmi🤗
& thanks 4 letting me call u Nimmi 😳

Hope u have been well😃

U came back so soon awe 😛

I loved d 2nd part & u got me so hooked😆

It ended so quickly I wanted 2 read more pouts

Loved Rahul & Zoe's scene in d start he's more of a family member I mean not only he had been Zoe's support he's close 2 her family too d way u wrote him talking wid Innaya's Fianc Hassan

awe Dillu Rashid meeting wid Zoe was very heart warming they take her as their daughter right

Nimmi I m little confused about family tree what about Zoe's family members & there r some new names too so plz 1 baar clear bta do sabke mummy papa aur Bhai behan ke naam lol

but d highlight of d updt was Asya ki pehli official meeting oh that feels😛

Both admired each other we can feel d love d passion d agony d pain both wanted 2 hug but controlled themselves...I m so so dying 2 know what's d past story what Asad said & if he's at fault why he wants Zoe 2 give him answers 😕😆

Innaya & Asad shared nice bond & he asked her 2 bring Zoe 4 a reunion hehe

Last scene was very lovely & u ended on cliffy wid entry of Rahul I guess

Nims plz Rahul Zoe ka angle mat dena pretty plz

& u r doing a great job wid d new story I m loving it...I m hooked excited & what not 4 story 2 unfold😛

Quote

Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#112

hey nims aapi
felt hapy to knw tat u startd a ff n asya
gone through chap1...n woww aapi amazing start it was
its such an intrestng story
so many thngs to unfold startng frm faroquis nd khans relation...asya seperation for 7lng years...asad referingg zoya as zaza...
wel written part aapi😃

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

chap 2
so finaly asya face off
wat mite b hapnd 7yrs bck tat asya r nt evn in talking terms cmfrtbly
aww asad plan fr their stay nd requestd inaya to cnvnce zoya

nd who s n d door??

aapi i budied u acpt my requst nd please let me knw when u wil update

Edited by Missadorable - 10 years ago

Quote

asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Res for Sis, Choco, CBP & All my friends.

Api... pardon me...mai comnt h nahe kia tha😭 owwy

But ths is awesome...I loved the beginning..I loved both the chappies...n I really can't wait to read how it proceeds...wht happened in past? Who just arrived... pls pls pls is rahul only a frnd...I lyked his character...hope he don't turn into some lover of zoya😳

Quote

Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Nice update
Liked their first meeting
Dilshad & Rashid gave her all attention and love. Asad planned was nice as he wanted to spend some time with her. Rahul Zoya friendship was nice. Waiting for story to unfold. Thanks for pm.
You can call me bhai, I have no issues.

Quote

Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Enjoying the read, absolutely look forward to the next chapter.

Quote

Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

awesome update...
continue soon...

thanks for the pm saima...

Quote

Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Quote

Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry
Res for Sis, Me and the Bacha Party 😃

Nice update Nims 👏. Now I really want to know what has happened between these guys. Mere ASYA 😭. What did this akdu say to her that she ran away. Loved the friends ka reunion made me miss my school buddies 😭

I love Rashid and Dilshaad already. Could feel their love for Zoya 😊. Please update soon. I will pray that this week passes quickly 😃

Love you dher saara 🤗

Hey Choco,

Im glad u liked the chap. Thank you sooo much. You'll get to know what he had said in a few parts, just a little wait.

Aww, here's a tighttt hug for you. Im here for u.. alwax

Lots of love back at u..

Quote

Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan
RES YAYY!
Unres'ing. Breathing in, breathing out. Thank God, I got to RES, second but ahh well Choco Berry, i got my eyes on you girl! ;)

Back to the update! I had mixed emotions reading this one. Firstly, Rahul is a true gem. He is like the best friend every girl dreams of but... he cannot come between Asad and Zoya. And he can definitely give Asad a hard time though. Sighs. Hopefully, no Zoya Rahul angle? Yeah, oh you are such a sweetheart. Thanks! He is definitely giving Zoya strength. That bit where he admires her in her sleep, poor thing. I am wondering what is bothering her so much but then I think I know. But will wait for you to reveal it. It was beautifully penned, touched my heart.

Rashid and Dilshad showering love on our beautiful Zoya, I love love that. They are like the perfect parents! It gave me warm warm feelings di, I like warm warm feelings! Hehe!

Ahhh, and their first meeting/eye contact, gave me goosebumps. I love how descriptive your writing is, the way you described Asad had me screaming KSG KSG KSG! And then drooled some more. And their first eye contact and then shaking hands. So awkward yet so electrifying. That's my favorite part! They are love. Wish they hugged and kissed and what not. That would have been passionate too. But, you won't do that. Just please, do not torture Asad. His sunshine is going to give him a hard time isn't she.

The friends bonding in the end was cute. Zoya got into a group hug with Asad. Zero weirdness or is bomb going to blast? Sighs. He isn't going to be happy seeing Rahul is he? Dreading his heart hurting some more.

Beautiful part di. I adore your writing, so descriptive, so smooth and so heart touching. Just one complaint, it ended too soon! Eagerly waiting for the next update. I cannot wait to unfold this story with you. It is a beautiful story and I am loving every bit of it.

Much love di,

XOXOXO

Hey Sunshine,

Firstly plzzz forgive ur Di for forgetting to put a res for u. It just slipped my mind. From next tym, dat wont happen. Promise. Even if i dnt mention, u get a 1st spot, always.

Coming to ur comment. U just dnt kno howuch i hav missed them. Aah.. it felt lonely widout ur beautiful replies, dey give me inspiration to write, you know wat a lazy butt i can be, dnt u? ;)

Thanks a tonne for your beautiful and kind words sweety.

Dont worry, i wont torture your Asad a lit, just a little bit, dats allowed, isnt it ;)

Hoping to have your support throught this one, need it.

Love you loads dearest.