AsYa FF ||Tu Hi Hakikat...Zariya Tu Hi...|| Final update pg 100

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#701

Res

Unres

Finally I'm here...

Sorry for being so late but I told you the reason for it..

Mmm from where should, I start?

First of all thank u very much for a happy ending..

U got me scared in the second last part about Zoya being dead or alive...

This was a very very well deserved ending to one of the most beautiful stories I have read here..

U know how this one was my favorite.

I loved this story as my own...

and thanks u did complete justice to the last part..

The FB. part about Zoya being in the hospital..

It was so well written...

So much high on emotional content..

Love you for this..

I knew Fakir Baba would also make an entry... and a perfect entry...

Loved the way Asad kept his faith intact and In fact it has deepened..

Loved how he cried out to his Ammi.

Zoya in coma was sad..

All the family members and shaaz and rehaan were good too...

Then the lovey dovey moments between Asya were just icing on the cake.

Thank you once again for giving this piece of art to us...

I know how difficult it is for you to squeeze time out and write...

Saying good byes has always been difficult for me..

And I don't want to say it to this story too...

But all good things come an end and so has this..

Loved loved loved it a lot and love you too...

After all I got my title of Tehs G here how can I leave from here😭

I retyped my comment all over again coz last time something went wrong..

And I didn't remember what all I wrote..

So all the best for your other stories...

Doosre thread par to hum hai hi😆😉

Edited by sweet_tehs - 8 years ago

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#702

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Res

Tehs... I am waiting for you to read and review

Do it fast... I am eager to know what you think about this last update

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shweta_yadav

@shweta_yadav

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#703

res

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Unres

Finally i m here

soory for being late but now i m here to unres before new year 😆 koi work next year ke lie no no

actually i thought previous update was the last one as i thought zoya is dead..i gt into depression isliye unres ni kia ( i knw it's 2 bad excuse )

Then when saw ur Pm for the real end part i was so happy that zoya bach gaye

Now come to the story Hakikat

one of the best i read on IF

form start to end it amazing to read ..plus ur writing style is always my fav

Mr. Scientist and Security in charge the concept itself is one of kind

How zoya changed asadand him forgiving his parents after so long etc

Their love ..

Starting to end its beautiful.

Feeling bit sad that it's end

but will meet again on other stories thread

hope u update them soon, though i know u r 2 busy and still giving ur time from your schedule fr us

Noww waiting fr

coffe one, even ic-cream epilogue is still pending, then U R Mine ... n the 2 of ur new stories which u planned to share.

Happy NewYear in Advance

May God fulfill all ur dreams..

Edited by shweta_yadav - 8 years ago

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#704

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
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Unres soon Shweta

you didn't for the part 17

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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#705

Really love it

Fabulous

Perfect end

Such an amazing story came to end

Thanks for pm

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#706

Thank u Prinky
So Hakikat a beautiful journey it was
Mr. Scientist and his Security in charge
Love their journey together she brought him out of his despair
She was his light at the end of the tunnel
she restored his faith in God and she path the way for him to forgive his parents
I could have walked with asad in his torture soul of the last five days
and then she asked him to leave and he couldn't return for six months
but a beautiful ending for them
loved it waiting for more of your stories

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@Sp8699

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#707

This story is my personal... favourite... loved it... I am following it from 11th chapter... here finally the journey ends... and I am really going to miss this story.. this is not only close to your heart but mines too... hope you write another Asya story soon... Ur are really a fabolous writer

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#708

Hellooo Di...😊

Dekhiye iss baar toh mein jaldi aagaya hun yahan...socha koi pending kaam nahi rahe mera toh aache hoga na...isiliye maine last update ki excitement mein yeh update jaldi se padh liye...

And as i was not disappointed with the outcome...meko laga hee tha ki Zoya bachegi zaroor...khair aur isse pehle bhi humne yeh discuss kiye hai ki baba will have a re-appearance in this story...woh bhi well placed thi...👏

All n All a very good update...

Abhi Aishwarya ki story pe bye karke aaya hun...aur ab aapke paas ek aur story ka THE END hoo raha hai...its like a part of you is leaving and you just have memories to cherish it...this forum is like that for me...and all of you people and their stories,...

Khair I wish you All The Best for future stories...aur aap aur likhein...😃

Take Care😊

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#709

It was wonderful
Loved it
Flashback scenes was nice
Finally he believed & feel relaxed.
Teasing on hospital bed was good
They met & proposal was simple & sweet
It was beautifully written story
Thanks for pm