Asya SS: Lost somewhere, chap 11, 2-01-2017 - Page 3

Originally posted by: jas91

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Rada what do I say this an outstandingly excellent start Sweetu😃

Mind-blowing Superb Excellent & what not😳

Main kya bolun kuch bhi kahun toh kam lagega

from start till d end I was completely into d story😛

thank you so much, I must confess that I was not convinced to publish it, but at the end, I found it cute and your words confort me in my choice. you always know how to put smile on my face 😃🤗

So Zoe has some business which needs help & she's here 2 meet AAK 4 that

Zoya ki intro as a non stop chatterbox man doesn't she even breath I felt she talks even more than Zoya in QH 😆😆
yes, she is, I am just like her when I am under pressure, i didn't notice that she was talking that much but you are not the first who mention this, I guess her dialogue was too long 😆. Promise next time she will be "quiet" 😆

Her prayer 2 Allah Miyan fulfilled when our hero made entry on horse lol😆 Truly 1 prince wali hi entry thi😉

A true prince is always on his horse 😉, to tell you the true, the title of the story was supposed to be : Miss beauty and mister beast, but I found it common that's why I change it at the end

I suppose he is some prince mayb cuz Adhi raat horse ride kon karta hai😆😆 & no civilisation 😲 why he lives in such place obviously prince wala hi koi angle hoga😉

& No points in guessing it is indeed Asad Ahmed Khan himself I m 200% sure I can bet it

! have 2 reasons 1 d world famous Who actually😆 & d other when he told his name & also d attraction both felt clearly gave that away😉

I have nothing to say about that 😉

Loved their banter it is always a treat 2 read these parts 😛

OMG Zoya's theories he can b serial rapist & psycho killer & than d nonstop nok jhok sachi she can can easily give anybody a headache😆😆

Good point, as always, Indeed, i should have mention this also, i totally forget about that, he could have reply this also 😆

& than d scene when she had 2 climb d horse he came 2 help 😳 & than their nok jhok on d speed of d horse & when she & Asad's baby teamed 2gther & Asad became jealous 😆😆

So Asad haven't told his real name knowing she came 2 meet him

& he felt that pinch when Zoya became sad awe😳

& d last ka part when Asad gave her his jacket when he saw d rain coming awe was just too sweet

& god that last ka punch when he made d horse run fast 😆

between them, it's going to be like this, a game of I hate you and I like you, it will be mix of many emotion,

PS- btw in last line Asad said He so was d horse male or female cuz earlier he said its a She... Yah it was just his prank😆

I forget to write it correctly 😕 but I guess I can use it in the up coming chapter as prank, thanks Jas for this another good point , so proud of you my girl

Originally posted by: ayat20

Nice part

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Yayy! Rada bck with new plot
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Originally posted by: Tunailuvsahil

Plz updt your other story took.but thanks for updt new storyyy really awesome starting.if I not wrong its was asad only not ayan hope im nt wrong.

But a big bisnessman why level in forest?Interesting plz cont soon LTS see how zoya concise asad

Originally posted by: aleenaansari

Awsm strt...u r an amazng writer
I'm in luv wid dis story already...
D concept is amazing...
Waiting 4 d nxt chptr...
Plzzz update soon

Originally posted by: fatima30

Love it rada!
Amazing and interesting concept
I want Mr Beast to be Asad...
Can't wait to read on
Update soon