New Asya (KaBhi) Os : Reliving Old Days

yum_immy thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#1
Hey guys😳

I know i know u all probably want to kill me now for not updating

Sorryyy... these past months were hell busy for me😭

So before i update i wrote an os for u all😃

This came to my mind yesterday when my sister wanted to watch disney and there was some show playing best of luck nikki i think

So yeh os uske ek epi se liya gaya hai not whole my idea...

So i hope u guys enjoy this

And this is dedicated Crazy Bacha party 😎


And specially to My Aapis 🤗
...

PART A

"Allah Miyan" said a tired zoya who entered the house with her 1 year old baby boy zain who was sleeping in one arm and bags full of grocery

"Aj toh halat buri hogayi.. ab weekend hai toh office se bhi chuti toh sukoon se rest karungi " thought zoya while sitting back on the sofa

"Zoya... tum agayi beta" smiled Dilshad while entering the hall

"Jee ammi... aj zain ko le gayi thi toh boht thak gayi hun" replied zoya tiredly

"Acha... suno ab kal tumhari chuti hai na?" Asked Dilshad

"Haan... par ki.." she was intruppted in between by Her MIL

"Bas phir kal mere sath tum Dargah chalna ok" said Dilshad making zoya frown...

"Ammi lekin.. " she tried to say but was again intrupted this time by her sweet SIL who just came downstairs

"Bhabhiii... kal apki chuti hai na?"
Najma asked her making zoya frown

"Ab iss ko kya kaam hai" thought zoya "Haan tomato" said zoya

" Great... ap kal ammi k sath jab dargah se ajayengi toh hum mera assignment pura karenge" she exclaimed making zoya press her head

"great.. ab kia karun" she thought

" haan lekin... " she was intrupted third time in the day by her husband who just entered home

" Mrs Khan kal apki chuti hai na?" Asked asad while coming towards her

"Allah Miya... ab inko bhi... ufff" thought an annoyed zoya and replied him "Jee toh ab apko kya kaam hai"? She asked trying to hide her annoyance

" aap please kal jakay mera suit le ayenga dry cleaner se.. woh laya nahi abhi tak " said Asad while zoya was trying hard to control and screamed

"ALLAH MIYA... WHATS WRONG WITH U ALL" she screamed out of annoyance

Ever since she got married everyone slowly has started to depend on her... she is managing her work as well as her home from last two years in which she didnt got a single day to her self
She has to look towards their every need...even her perfectionist husband has started to depend on herm.. not that she is complaining but can't she get two minutes to herself?

Everyone looked shocked towards her who was looking at them with annoyance written over her face while zain who was sleeping peacefully on the couch woke up hearing his mother scream and was looking towards her ready to cry any moment


"Kya mujhe do min sukoon ke mil sakte hain please? She asked calmy this time while picking up zain

"Aray beta poochne ki kya baat hai.. tum betho sukoon se.. Najma pani lao " said dilshad while caressing her head

Zoya sat down on the sofa and shuted her eyes tiredly while patting zain's back but opened them angrily when she heard her hubby Again

" aray woh woh meri tshirts bhi..." Asad stammered and looked towards the khan ladies who are now glaring at him specially his wife who looked at him as if she is gonna murder him right now

"Thats it.. mei kamre mei ja rahi hun.."zoya said angrily while getting up again and walkted towards their room angrily and shuted the door with a bang making everyone jump there

"Asad tum bhi na... bechari ko 2 min sukoon ke nahi miltay" sighed Dilshad while glaring at Asad

"Seriously Bhaijaaan.. bechari bhabi " Najma also joined her mother making asad look towards them with a glare

"Aap log toh aisay keh rahay hain jaisay meine hi unse dargah aur assignment karne ko bhi kaha... sara blame mujh pe daal diya" said Asad while looking at them with a glare

"Haan waisay ghalti toh humari bhi hai... jab se tum dono ki shaadi hui hai zoya ko 2 min sukoon k nahi diye.. hum sab uspe kaisay dependend hogaye nahi?" Smiled Dilshad

"Haan ammi... jab se bhabhi ayi hain humara ek din unke bagair nahi guzarta... humaray sath work aur zain ko bhi sambhalti hain woh... aur ab toh bhaijaan ko bhi nahi" said Najma looking at Asad with an amused look on her face

" ap dono bilkul sahi keh rahay hain" sighed Asad " Zoya apni responsibilities mei itna masroof hojati hain ke khud ke liye unko time hi nahi milta " sighed Asad sadly

"Bhaijaan ammi kuch sochen k bhabhi ko kaisay manaya jaye" Najma said while looking at both of them

"Hmmm sochna toh hoga.. " said both of them

...


wll update part b tomorrow Inn Shaa Allah😳


Edited by yumna.imad - 9 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

23

Views

3.1k

Users

19

Likes

43

Frequent Posters

yum_immy thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
res for part B
Edited by yumna.imad - 9 years ago
ChocoBerry thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Res for Bacha Party 😃

Hey Yumi, itna realistic plot. Bilkul dani hai, after marriage all start depending on you so so much. I understand what Zoya was going through. I do the same sometimes. Shut my door n sit, not listening to anyone nor doing anything for anyone. But that lasts for only about half hr max 😛


But I loved the whole thing and look forward to what they do to pacify her 😃


Oh n last but not the least, thank you for the dedication 🤗
Edited by ChocoBerry - 9 years ago
ashlesha2 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Am I included in the bacha party😕
anyways
congrats
is this work going to be ur boths?
I'm interested
ashlesha2 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#5
res
unres

sorry for the late

so cute moments
koved it
wonderful
awesome
adorable😃
Edited by ashlesha2 - 9 years ago
Gulaabo thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
#6
R
Unres

Oh wow! Such a cute theme! Women and their chores...never ending and zoya dealing with the same thing

Apt reaction she gave

It would be sweet to know how khans manaofy her

Continue soon
Edited by Gulaabo - 9 years ago
fatima30 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Love it
Looking forward to reading how the Khan family manaofy Zoya!
Binzzz thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#8
nice start...loved it..
poor zoya...she is not getting much time for herself..
everyone r depending on her..its very tiring :(
continue next part soon :)
MayurChan thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Res for Bacha Party😃


Thank U soo much for the RES* Choco..
Yumna...
Interesting part...
Zoya ko toh sahi bhi BECHARI banadiya hai...yahan KV waalon ne...hahaha.
Excited to Know what are they planning...
Continue soon...
asifiqbalsh thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#10
It was awesome
She has no time for her. Everyone was dependent on her. Waiting to see how they pacify Zoya. Thanks for pm

Related Topics

Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove · 2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand â–¼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand â–¼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster · 7 months ago

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand â–¼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69 · 7 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand â–¼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69 · 7 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

Expand â–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".