AsYa(KaBhi)TS: Through the Mist Pt 3 Up (24/5).

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jaanu013

@jaanu013

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Awesome update..read both parts at a time..interesting storyZoya killed herself or tanveer killed her..but asad still lives in her memories..felt very sadghost appearance of Zoya..and what did asad see on the window...?zoya's revenge..? Waiting for the next part...

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

interesting concept...liked the way u portrayed asad's emotions...thanks 4 pm cont soon...cant wait to read

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

It was a shocking update for me
Zoya committed suicide. She was here now & asad was relieved as he felt everything real. He saw something in window. Is it a Zoya image. Curious to know what happened next. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Oh Damn

I didn't know Zoya was dead

Now Im sad

😭

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

It actually made me cry

The second part was extremely emotional

Wished zoya hadn't died

Hope that tanveers truth comes out in the open soon

Please continue soon😊

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

You really penned down it well..

So hearttouching update..

Loved ilthe second part too..

Beautiful

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Loved it

Want next update asap

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simmi

@-simmi-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

😭 😭
It was damn sad 😭
Zoya is ghost!!
And that tanveer 😡 🤬
Raziya hmm but why she did that?? Helping asad ehh?? I thought she hated asad and zoya 😕
I wonder what will happen we asad found out he will kill tanveer 😆
Zoya.. the way u describe her emotions 👏
Loved it
Fantastic ⭐️

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

zoya was dead😭
never thought about zoya will commit suicide...
nice update..
asad is still leaving the memory of zoya..
what was that...zoya's ghost 😲
continue next part soon..

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Amazing story yaar. Read both parts in over go. Want more jaldi. Can understand that there was a conspiracy behind Zoya's death. Want to know what's happening. Please update soon and please do pm me 😊