ASYA OS-LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ankiecool
thanx a lot saima diwill upload the next part soon

Great

Promise to try and read it as soon as u post it

Big hug

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

omg!!!! this is damn cool
and interesting yaar
awesome blossom
pls pm me when u update pls pls
i wanna read more

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

nice story dear...

game part was too good

loved it

last main Asad hi aaya na

cont soon

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Shikha

@ShikhaRathore

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

nice starting waiting for next , bechari zoya haar gyi

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EMOksgian

@EMOksgian

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

well written and nice start :)
asya @ clg alvys a treat to read , bdw chatni bana dungi vs so funny ;) bt she should reacted a bit dat time den dis teasing session during match vl look more gud :) bt amazing start ankie ..continue soon !!

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Nice part!

Why so short?

I really liked the interactions between asya

Want a longer part next

Good job

Continue soon

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Awesome Start Dear👏😊

Zoya n Asad met in Rajasthan😊

They r there for a camp😃

D badminton game was awesome😃

Why Zoya is crying for Asad?😭

Why they r separated 4m 5 years?😲

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Vaishali

@MeDHellsAngel

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Bht chotu update tha yar 😔

Chl koi ni.

Bht awesome tha. I just loved it thoroughly.

Awesome.

Plz continue super soon nd pm me.😳

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Lovely OS on ASYA(KABHI).😊

ASYA(KABHI) Flashback was so Nicely explained.😊

ASYA(KABHI) Game Part was so Nice.😊

ASYA(KABHI) Conversation at Present was so Beautifully explained.😊

The Whole Os was so Lovely explained.😊

Please write like this and Pm to me.😊

__________________________________

(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Lovely OS on ASYA(KABHI).😊
ASYA(KABHI) Flashback was so Nicely explained.😊
ASYA(KABHI) Game Part was so Nice.😊
ASYA(KABHI) Conversation at Present was so Beautifully explained.😊
The Whole Os was so Lovely explained.😊
Please write like this and Pm to me.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

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