New ASYA OS: We Always Were updated 15/10/15

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Awesome Choco..

I loved it...

I read both...

It was so cute...Their friendship...

But Asad was in pain all along...

I liked both the versions but I just don't like the death part..

Zoya was a dumbo really...

She never knew about his real feelings...

Lol Asad was not a tameez n Tehzeeb lecturer here😆

Also all Zoya's dates were 😆

All interested in hanky panky than in her😆

For the sad one I would say I can still handle rejections n separations but death...I really can't..

N Choco what's wrong with you?

Tumne hamare Asad ko maar diya😲

Anyways liked both the parts...

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Thanku for res pyar ki dukaan 🤗

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Choco 🤗
Oh i lovevvv it so much
the beginning so gud to read
and i personally like to read in 1st person narrative
and u gave me jst that and that too beautifully written
i really love asad aww...how much he love her and she! Failed to chose the right guy fr prom
and the confession came out very good and ur writing jst added to the flavour 👏
both the endings were nice bt i have ths crazy preferable mindset to the sad one 😆
great job...keep writing 🤗

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Awesome update choco

Yes we have read and written so much about childhood love but still the pain...asad's pain here was so palpable!

Hidden love... Thank god zoya realized after years...

I read the happy ending...and I really loved it

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Ok that was superb.. I obviously loved the the first ending and not the second one..!
That was super cute.. loved friendships developing into marriages. .!

After reading the first part I thought the bad ending would be they not being together nd zoya going away with another boy.. 😆
anyway amazing attempt as always..:*

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Ankita

@AisiDeewangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Awesome awesome awesome
👏

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ASYAaishu

@ASYAaishu

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

i like the sad one..

but believe me, both are truly beautiful...

plz continue writing...:-)

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Annie

@_Annie_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Brilliant OS Choco-chip! 👏

Asad's love was so pure and unblemished. I adored how he loved Zoya but never spoke up in case he makes it awkward between them. Childhood sweethearts <3 Aah! I love them😳

I thought your sad ending would be Zoya not reciprocating his feelings or gets married to someone else, but aapne tou mere Asad ko maar hi dia choco-chip😲

Haha. Who cares what the ending is, what matters to me is AsYa were together and in love with each other

Keep writing more Choco-chip. Take care, lots of lovee 🤗

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Omg l love the first one

It absolutely beautiful

I am a happy ending freak

The second one made me cry

He got his love but lost his life

Poor baby

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Awesome OS Dear

I loved d happy one

Sad one ko like bhi nahi kiya jaa

Dusht ladki! Asad ko maar daala?

Cumn to d happy one, it was so lovely

Its one of d cutest OS I ever read here

Asad fell in love wid d tomboy Zoya

But Zoya had no idea abt it

I don't understand Zoya dating several guys so easily

I mean I never saw a tomboy dating so easily in movies or shows

Zoya had several break-ups

Asad too started dating some girls

It was realistic instead of Asad being a devdas in hope of getn Zoya to love him back all his life n if not then bcum a sanyasi

Asad finally told Zoya his feelings

And she accepted him

They kissed n made love to each other

And then finally married each other

Their love for each other was very awesome

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