New ASYA OS: We Always Were updated 15/10/15

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Hmphhh. First one better. More like an English high school movie.
Second one more like a Korean TVC :p
For the second one thought that zoya would get married to some one else n goes on... but the last five lines gave a catch in tummy! :(

First one gets the vote!!
Lovely read Choco. Love you. 🤗

Hey Ankie, hope you are well 😊

Thanks for reading dear even though it's a stale concept, just in my words 😳. I like happy endings too but some how a sad end to this one felt OK too. So I decided on posting both.

Love you too dear 🤗

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: rajsmi
Okay, I hit the like button for both :-) Much as I like a very happy ending always, I did like both the endings. Although, I thought the sad ending would be different. I thought she would say that they would always be friends and couldn't think of him as her love!
Guess we all have different interpretations :-)

Hey Smitha,

Glad you liked both. I love happy endings too 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Wonderful os
Thanks for pm

Thanks dear. Glad you liked it 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Thank you so much for the res Ashi

Love you

Choco absolutely beautiful

I loved the ending the most even though it was tear jerking it was really well written. Please continue to write more OS

Hey Sis,

Without your support mein nahi kar paati, you know that. I have to have your approval or you know how unsure I get off my writing. You've been my inspiration here.

Am so so happy you liked the sad one too .

Love you infinite 🤗

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Couldnt believe the turn of events but loved it nonetheless. However the happy ending one was better for me

Her Azraa, glad you enjoyed both. For me too its a happy endings always 😳

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Wonderfully written and emotional Part Choco...
Thank God for small miracles U decided on posting both the Happy and Sad versions...
Well as usual I will go with the Happy one...but after reading about Asad & his luck in life...chances of 2nd one changing in reality were more...
But i have a question...how come with just a confession Zoya realised that she likes Asad..?
Hhahahaha...
Liked reading it...
Take Care.

Hey Mayur, glad you liked it dear 😊. Lol I had to post both as Ashii n Sis wanted a sad one and Nims wanted a happy one, so mein kissi ko bhi naaraz nahi kar sakti thi. That's why posted both 😳

True that, but, as you just said, thank god for small miracles... Maybe her coming in his life was the miracle waiting for him to happen for things to look up always for him 😳

Ab love realization ka kya hai, sometimes it takes a life time for one to realize n someone's just a fraction of a second is enough.

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2
It was so the great
They had a happy ending
And next thing you know
Asad dies
Wow

Lol. Experimental tha, hope you still enjoyed it 😛😳

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
Loved it..
Great job..

Thanks Arpita 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ajanshul

beautiful os

Thank you dear 😃

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Nim

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Hey Choco,

Just got a moment to sign in here. Read the os, both but u kno which one i like more, dont you?

It was a simply such a sweeet read. I love it. Asad has been what you call a true friend in all senses throughout the years without a grudge that she didnt return her feelings. I felt for him. He is a sweetheart to have let her go with sumone else for the prom but then again it was good, otherwise he wud have never told her.

Loved all their moments :)

The sad one was very gud too but its a little painful to think that way.

But keep the good work n keep it coming.

Looking forward to more of ur awesomness.

Love you loadsss.