New AsYa FF - Rejected by Husband ~ Epilogue ~ Pg. 147 - Page 45

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Posted: 10 years ago
Funny zoya though that it was an elegant party
N It was just a football game
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: soumya.g

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Unrest
Hey piya, I was inactive for months but when I visited IF again I found your story worst kind of betrayeral. I must say it was an amazing work. I know it is not your ff but the asya version, the way you described zoya's feelings was MA. And I.
loved that Asad too. Anyway I came to know u started a new story I finished all chapters in a go this is also very nice.
First chapter when asad said give me a son zoya...I felt like killing him though I don't know what deal he made with her father, but he made her life miserable and that too for 18 months...But zoya really loved him and she kept hoping that one day he will also learn to love her... but now she decided its enough ...but somewhere I feel assets too knows that the way he is treating zoya is not good...that is why he is not meeting her eyes...not kissing on lips...but what I don't like is the way he try to seduce her...knowing the effects he have on her...but again he too can't seems to keep his hands off her...and that Gaffur he never treated zoya with love and how made her marriage deal...and how he separated her dog from her...I had tears in my eyes reading that part...but in last two chapters...when zoya gave assets a piece of her mind...finally he seems to understood he made her feel ashamed ...now he is trying to correct it ...workstation 's part and says conversation was nice...finally he came to know about her hoobies ...and car conversation and how he told her that she was never a shame to him ...Nice chapter, already waiting for next...



Hi...so nice to know you enjoyed reading bith the stories. Zoya is getting stronger and adamant about leaving Asad. He is starting to realize his mistakes. I personally liked this chapter because I love to see Asad getting jealous and protective. 😳
He is trying hard, let's see if he'll succeed or not
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

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Awesome Part Dear👏😊
So Zoya cut her long hair into short
Wat kind of a father Gaffur is? Not letn her even have a haircut? Is he mad?😡
Asad never cared abt his wife but now cares abt her dog...wowww🥱
Dis Gaffur even had problem wid her dog...Why can't he go n kill himself?😡
Asad lied to Zoya abt business thing n tuk her to meet his friends
Zoya did not liked Asad lying n blasted him
Loved Zoya's interactions wid his friends
Did not like Asad being too possessive which felt like suffocating
Even did not liked Asad teln lied dat Zoya hates football n him teln Zoya dat he tell excuse to his friends dat he wanted her for himself so he never brought her wid him. Wat a lier?🥱
Was Asad really abt to kiss Zoya or wud have backed off at d last moment?
Zoya is still letn him to touch her n try to kiss her
Asad is teln dat he was never ashamed of her. Is he true?
Will Asad tell her abt d entire deal himself or Zoya will drop d bomb on him?
Where is Zoya's mother in all dis n how she let Zoya be d pawn by marrying Asad?



There are many parents who don't let their daughters cut their hair especially in India. One of my friend had long hair but her parents wouldn't let her cut.

Asad lied because he knew if he told the truth she wouldn't come with him and he really wanted to take her with him. Zoya let him touch her because somewhere deep in her heart she still loves him. He also loves her but his feelings overshadowed by his anger. Now when the reason doesn't exist anymore, he doesn't want to lose her.

Asad will tell about the deal himself...Zoya will tell about the pregnancy too...all this coming up in the next chapter

Zoya's mother passed away.

Thanks for the lovely feedback Juhi. Glad to know you are enjoying this story
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: blueberry02

Nyc part
loved it
thanq.



Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ovi-

awesome update. sorry I didn't comment for last two update I was really busy but I readed them and I loved it. I eager to know if it's have happy ending or not. I really like the story and I love happy ending thanks for the pm



Yes, this story has happy ending ... 😊
Glad you are enjoying reading it
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ayat20

Asad is jealous..

So finally he is taking her out as his wife n introducing her to his friends...
Finally asad has started repenting for what he has done
But has a long way to go...



Yes he has finally started repenting it
And yes, he has a longgg way to go 😆
Jealous Asad is a treat 😉
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Amina...

OMG! This was so beautiful , so cute😳
Loved it😳
Continue soon plz😛

Thank for the pm😊



Thanks 😊
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome blossom!! 👏
Edited by -simmi- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yo!! I love jealousy 😎
Hehe rehaan he was cute the way he flirted with zoya 😆
Samar he looks sensible 😳 i kinda like him
And asad's temper woah he looks hot in his angry mode 😳
Hehe zoya is right and i guess first time asad is facing how complicated we girlz can be 😆
But first he need to sort what he wants from zoya coz now he is a confuse soul and i pity him but by his actions he making her confuse too 😕
Fab work deary 👏
Keep it up!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

This was a really good part..

Asad finally started realising his mistakes..
There is no single part here from asad's POV..
I would really like to know his pov.

N i hope he is sincere this time n does not have any other motives..

He actually complimented her..
Was a jealous possessive husband.
N again I hope this is not just a show but for real.
Coz it would be very bad if he broke her heart again.

The last part in the car was really very nice.

Your updates are like the morning tea..
I always wait for them when I wake up.

Will u finish this before 21?



Hi Tehs,

Glad to know you liked this part. His POV will not come till the end. The story is written from girl's POV. He had started realising his mistake and he's trying to fix it. His efforts are genuine...there are no hidden motives.

He was in real complimenting her. As a matter fact he was mesmerized by her beauty the first time he saw her. Of course Zoya doesn't know that. She herself feels she is not pretty because the way Gaffur has raised her.

I am really happy to provide entertainmeht to you all first thing in the morning 😆

Will update soon

Pia

PS: Most likely it should finish by 21. Why were you asking? Are u going somewhere?
Edited by iluvasya - 10 years ago

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