Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Hey Dear,
Read both the parts now. My heart went out to Zoe, poor soul has been subjected to so muchemotional torture without a fault of hers.
Dat father of hers, should be taught a lesson just in the same as he has dictated n tuined his daughter's life. I hope we do get to see him coming to an unfortunate but deserving end. I honestly, at this moment hate him so damn much. He dsnt even deserves to b called a human let alone a father.
Coming to Asad. Well, finally he realized n believed dat his wife was innocent in this all. Well done Asad. Now he thinks its the best time to start their relationship over. Wow. Propelled by guilt now, are we? Seriously, i cried reading these parts. The two men who were supposed to love and cherish Zoe are the ones who have hurt her the most, all becox of a certain deal. I get the idea dat Asad was pushed in to this. That vile man must have trapped him in sumway but dat never gave Asad the rite to treat Zoe so rudely. He shud have spoken to her instead of hating her every moment.
I feel so sad for Zoe, she married for love but all she got in return was hurt, pain n rejection. I just hope she doesn't give upn forgive Assd if he further tries to please her to ease his conscience. Y was it so hard for him to thnk of himself to b in luv wid zoe at the tym they were getting married? For her to believe dat i mean.
Am really v upset wid Asad right now. He definitely had his reasons but it wud hav been vetter if he shared it wid his wife instead of making the living arrangement n their lives a torture.
Waiting for the next part... eagerly...
Loveee.
Ps.. looking forward to ur fav book after this ;)
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