New AsYa FF - Rejected by Husband ~ Epilogue ~ Pg. 147 - Page 17

Really feeling bad for Zoya..
Asad is totally complicated..I am feeling he is not what he is pretending him to be..
Want to see the romantic Asad...
Do continue soon..😉

Originally posted by: shailu123

That was an Awesome update 👍🏼
Waiting to know what will happen now
Continue soon plz😳

Thanks Shailu
Glad u liked it

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

I read ur story

U wrote very nicely

Copy hai to kya? Chalta hai yaar

I am sorry but I am hating Asad's character here

He is such a asshole treating Zoya like a toy

I felt bad for Zoya

How can he use his physical strength to get his way?

Such a coward

Glad dat Zoya brought marital rape threat

He needed dat

I hope Zoya miscarries again or gets pregnant wid a girl

Dunno why he wants only a boy?
He never even kissed???

I am waiting to see d change but if Asad keeps on winning over Zoya then I don't think I can read anymore as wat all Asad is doing to Zoya is very cheap n disgusting no matter wat she did to him.

Anyways, u r awesome for a new writer

I am Juhi

Wats ur name?

Is it some Mills n Boon story?

Hi Juhi, nice to meet you. I am Pia. Thanks for reading and giving this lovely feedback.
This story is not another Mill and Boon type.

Zoya's character may look weak right now but she'll cone out very strong in this story. Asad will never abuse her. There is a reason why he keep asking for a son. But there will be a time in this story when he would want it's to be a girl but it will be Zoya who would want a son.

Di read the who story...I am sure you will like it. 😊

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

very beautifully written.i lk it.

its quite depressing for zoya..she is mentally suffering

also asad's cold behavior nt helping...

i hp asad overcm his anger & try to undrstand her feelings also..his behavior hurting zoya..

very interesting,wntd to knw hw asya overcm ths situatn & move on with thr relatnshp.

thnks 4 pm.cntinu soon.

She is depressed and Asad is not helping. He will. They'll surely going to come out of their horrible situation once they find out the truth. Asad is going to repent a lot. Will update soon.

Originally posted by: iluvasya

Hi Juhi, nice to meet you. I am Pia. Thanks for reading and giving this lovely feedback.
This story is not another Mill and Boon type.

Zoya's character may look weak right now but she'll cone out very strong in this story. Asad will never abuse her. There is a reason why he keep asking for a son. But there will be a time in this story when he would want it's to be a girl but it will be Zoya who would want a son.

Di read the who story...I am sure you will like it. 😊

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Awesome part...

Ohh Zoya was superb here...

Why didn't she stand up for herself early in the marriage...

Many things got cleared too like the baby their wedding and stuff...

So Asad isn't all icy he feels for her but something is stopping him...

I'm sure he will come around soon.

Zoya was led to believe that Asad loves her...all this time she was hoping he'll change. She has lost all the patience now.

Asad is a complex character. You'll see his caring and loving side soon...maybe after another two chapters. He'll regret so much. But Zoya will never believe in anything he'll say or do.

It's always a pkeasure to read your feedback 😃

Lovely
Looks like asad is hitched
Surely. .zoya is attracted to hee sexy husband too
What's the problem yaar????

Zoya was on a spree in this update.. loved her fiesty behaviour. . Asad so deserves this..
hate asad..!
Awesome update.. this is getting interesting..:)
Loving it..:)

Originally posted by: blueberry02

Awesome update

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: ksen

just read both the parts together

interesting story

felt bad for zoya

excited for the next part

Thanks
Glad u liked it