New ASYA story: The Eyewitness, Chapter 11, pg 71, 19/01/2016 - Page 8

Originally posted by: sasir

Interesting

Originally posted by: ASYAaishu

i like the plot..

really different for those of others..

plz cont soon..

Originally posted by: -Sathya7n-

wow what a mind blowing first chapter 1 😎

it was really amazing concept 👏

our musibat magnet is an eyewitness here 😆

but where is Mr.Khan 😳

waiting for next one

Originally posted by: jas91

hugs Choco

OMG this time it is killer concept😲⭐️

1st part was mind blowing👏

It was so gripping & tightly scripted👏...Credit 2 u & d original writer as now u both share this piece of art😊

so Zoe is d eyewitness who's being hidden but culprits get wind of it & attempt 2 kill her but thank god she survived credit 2 d secret chest I must say I loved d scene how she discovered d chest & d toys & locket she found there😛

I have a doubt can it b possible that they r her own things? as u mentioned Zoe is orphan & her parents died when she was young quite possible how delicately u described d locket & how she discovered d place it felt like she had been there many times in her childhood😛 Khair its my imagination so avoid that😆

so yeah she got saved due 2 d hiding place & now is alone at a big house wid 3 dead bodies

🤢 A very frightening situation 😵

It seems like a really interesting & exciting story 2 read & I m looking forward 2 it😊

& yeah most imp. waiting 4 Asad's entry😆 what he'll b playin a secret cop/agent type?

Choco can I rqst u something😳 if possible do add pictures of places & dresses they wear cuz that makes it interesting 4 d readers like jaise bachpan main we used 2 like reading books wid pictures instead of plane books. Not that its less interesting now but its just gives wings 2 our imaginations waise koi logic nahi hai baat main bas smajh lo meri naadaan si rqst hai😳😆😆

Originally posted by: _Annie_

Oh meri Choco-Chip! Such a highly intriguing concept this time. Loved the concept <3

Poor Zoe. I knw my Mr. Khan is around in the next update :)

Seems like a thrilling story Choco. And I'm completely in for this! :)

Hope you're well Choco-chip...its been ages since we've chatted. Miss you <3 Update soon and take care 🤗

Originally posted by: shailu123

Hey choco its an awesome start👍🏼
Its so interesting continue soon😊

Originally posted by: -simmi-

Res
Unress 😃
Woah choco that was an awesome read 👏
Zoya is Eyewitness 😲
Love the concept 😳
And don't asad is villian if it is then it'll be so cool 😃
Bakiyo ka pta ni mujhe bhut mza ayega 😉
Don't be nervous coz it was superb super like 😆
Pls continue 😳

Originally posted by: _Annie_

The banner's amazing Afra <3 Great effort :)

Originally posted by: binuuu

nice start di 😊

lot of mystery :)

zoya's life is in danger 😔

that 3 peoples are dead who is there for to save zoya 😭

zoya was married.. only 6 months..poor girl...

when will asad enter

waiting to reveal all mystery..

Originally posted by: NaughtyRiya

Amazing concept
i like it
Thanks for pm
update soon...