New ASYA story: The Eyewitness, Chapter 11, pg 71, 19/01/2016 - Page 7

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Annie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh meri Choco-Chip! Such a highly intriguing concept this time. Loved the concept <3

Poor Zoe. I knw my Mr. Khan is around in the next update :)

Seems like a thrilling story Choco. And I'm completely in for this! :)

Hope you're well Choco-chip...its been ages since we've chatted. Miss you <3 Update soon and take care 🤗

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Annie

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Posted: 9 years ago

The banner's amazing Afra <3 Great effort :)

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Ankita

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing concept
i like it
Thanks for pm
update soon...

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Hey Mayur, thank you so much for boosting my confidence and definitely after your comment I felt so so happy. Am on cloud nine reading your comment and trust me I shared it with my hubby dearest too. He smiled reading it too. (Psst... He underestimates my talent. Abhi, I smirked at his reaction😆)

Glad to see that you trust me with this one too and I really hope I don't let you down😳

I would Just say...After reading this comment...I am smiling like GOOFUS.. 😳

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paru

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Posted: 9 years ago

Congratulation choco for new story

Concept is very nice

i like it soo much

keep it up

Asad to muje dikha hi nahi

bechari zoya usko hi eyewitness kyu hona tha

Kuch to interesting hone wala

asad kaha hai?

Pls yaar jaldi se update kar

Mera confusion door karo

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Avie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Unress on pg.3! 🤗

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -simmi-
Nice idea jas 👍🏼
It was good but sometimes thriller stories confuse me due to the language they use 🤓

Hehe I know Sim sometimes kuch writers kafi difficult language use karte hain but what can we do if they find it suitable 4 themselves😳

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is not your usual, really look forward to reading this!

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MyAnastasia18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Omg I sooo loved this!!!!!!

My breath was caught in my throat while reading this.. So eager to read more...

Plz pm me

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Yeah problem to solved...
But wo jab tak dashing entry nahi marega tab tak thrill double thrill kaise hogi

Tehs, lo get ready for double thrill 😉😆

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