New ASYA story: The Eyewitness, Chapter 11, pg 71, 19/01/2016

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hey Choco..
Well you are one of the most sought after and one of my Favourite Writers on this Forum...you don't have to worry much about this one..
Yes You can be Nervous because of the Genre...but that also is very intruguing and interesting...a New try thing for U...so I wish you all the best for this one..
For the Update...The story has started...the thing is in suspense kind of stories their are always some kind of questions which always leave us wanting for more...because of our curiosity..
So plzz...Continue this Soon.
And Yess #Credit to writer...of this story..should be given for sure..hahaha..

Hey Mayur, thank you so much for boosting my confidence and definitely after your comment I felt so so happy. Am on cloud nine reading your comment and trust me I shared it with my hubby dearest too. He smiled reading it too. (Psst... He underestimates my talent. Abhi, I smirked at his reaction 😆)

Glad to see that you trust me with this one too and I really hope I don't let you down 😳

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aseela sha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Choco darling its an amazing story

You are right this story is a thriller one

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Hey Choco

Wonderful story n concept...

All thrill n suspense...

Thanks for sharing it here..

N don't be nervous it has come out very well..

Too much suspense..high profile murder...

Even some one leaking her security too...

Zoya already married n divorced...

Good warna AAK ka Kya hota?😉

But WHERE IS AAK?

Continue super soon...

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: nizahairu
Nice concept

Thanks dear. Glad you liked it. But as I mentioned, this isn't my story an adapting it to ASYA n posting 😳. Hope you enjoy it till the end 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Avie
Mine...

Happy to see you Berry.. Hope you are well... It has been long :)

Me happy to see you too sweetie 🤗. Yes am well. How's your uni? You being missed too ❤️

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: cutie15
Hey..:)
It feels good to see you with a new story..:)
The concept is awesome. .:)
I loved the starting.. this seems so interesting. .
but where is asad..?? ;)

Amazing start.. dont be nervous.. we are always there for u..:)

Update soon. .:) will be waiting. .:)

Hey, it's good to be here. Trust me, as much as I want too, time nahi milta

Am glad you liked the opening, hope an able to live up to your expectations 😳

Asad will come in the next update 😃

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice start
Interesting concept
Zoya, eyewitness of murder.
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm

Thanks Asif, am glad you liked it 😃

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Thank lil bro, glad you liked it 😃

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi
Amazing update... & Interesting concept ... 😊

Thanks dear, glad you liked it😃

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: anopama
Nice start
So a murder mystery
Zoya the eyewitness under protection
But someone who knows abt her is a leak
Her protectors r dead and she is all alone
Wow ahe was married to who
And what role does Asad play in all this
Continue soon thanks for pm

Hey Anopama, hope you are well 😊

All your questions will be addressed as and when the story unfolds. Hope you will like it all 😳