New ASYA story: The Eyewitness, Chapter 11, pg 71, 19/01/2016 - Page 2

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simmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Woah choco that was an awesome read 👏
Zoya is Eyewitness 😲
Love the concept 😳
And don't asad is villian if it is then it'll be so cool 😃
Bakiyo ka pta ni mujhe bhut mza ayega 😉
Don't be nervous coz it was superb super like 😆
Pls continue 😳

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Avie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Mine...

Happy to see you Berry.. Hope you are well... It has been long :)

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Finally!! I can comment now.. 😆

OMG!!! One part down and it's already thrilling.. 😃

Brilliantly written.. 👏👏 Although I need not say it..

Zoya has no one whom she call her own.. And she is the middle of a crime..

I can't believe people were sent to murder her.. How alone she must be.. 😭😭

And ZOya cannot even trust the police with her life anymore..

Hope she soon goes somewhere safe..

I am way too excited to wait Berry.. 😆 Jaldi update karo na plss.. 😳😳

Love you loads!! Mwah! ❤️

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey..:)
It feels good to see you with a new story..:)
The concept is awesome. .:)
I loved the starting.. this seems so interesting. .
but where is asad..?? ;)

Amazing start.. dont be nervous.. we are always there for u..:)

Update soon. .:) will be waiting. .:)

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice start
Interesting concept
Zoya, eyewitness of murder.
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm

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Abi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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arorasurbhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing update... & Interesting concept ... 😊

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anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice start

So a murder mystery

Zoya the eyewitness under protection

But someone who knows abt her is a leak

Her protectors r dead and she is all alone

Wow ahe was married to who

And what role does Asad play in all this

Continue soon thanks for pm

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fatima30

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Posted: 9 years ago

Loved it
It's really interesting
Thank you for the PM

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KeyaHira2

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hmm

Its mysterious

I like it already

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Amina...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice start 👏
Continue soon 😊

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