New ASYA story: The Eyewitness, Chapter 11, pg 71, 19/01/2016

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Interestingly update

Asad's house Is full-tech secured

asya's first hug

loved the whole update

continue soon :-))

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Shaila Banu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Wow awesome update 👏
Asad is really intelligent gosh so many alarms system he has 👍🏼
And the secret room is just mind blowing 👏
Love asya's little moments
Hey I really like Ur story plzz don't drope it 😳
Continue soon 😊

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Abi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

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Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

It was really an interesting update..
AsYa at Asads grandfather's house and he is showing her over the place..
Asad is really a born detective..
Loved the update..
Do continue soon..

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KeyaHira2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Asad is like the Indian Batman

Lol

I loved the chapter

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muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Amazing update

Loved reading it

And please i really love the story and would want it to reach its final destination so please don't discontinue it😭

Looking forward to the upcoming updates

Please continue soon 😊

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Awesome update
Asad replied her & told her abt his family. Safe room & other security measures was nice. Zoya felt safe & secure with him. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Wow I loved how this house is designed. . It is so secretive and so smart
I loved the hidden room..
wow. That is extremely genius..
asad is so intelligent.
Nd zoya is finally feeling a little safe..
there hug was so soothing for zoya..
Awesome chapter..
waiting for the next one..;)
Thank u..:) take care. :)

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fatima30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#189

I love your story
I'm so totally hooked
I'm feeling really bad that you're not getting the response you deserve for this amazing piece of writing

Asya's first hug was sweet and so comforting for Zoya...
Love Asad's property!
Looking forward to reading on

xxx

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#190

Interesting part Choco..
Actually now i am eager to see if their are any pics of the secret room you described...in that kitchen...i mean their must have been some image and imagination behind this...
Very intruguing part...
And Plss...don't think about the response...for continuing this storyy...this is deffo worth a read..
Continue soonish..