New ASYA story: The Eyewitness, Chapter 11, pg 71, 19/01/2016 - Page 13

Originally posted by: jas91

out an out a fantastic updt👏👏

D original writer is really excellent i must say

& thanks a ton Choco 4 sharing this awesome work wid us🤗

Its so intriguing & i m totally thrilled 2 read it😛

Poor Zoe has 2 run & hide herself even after being innocent

& Asad ki entry bhi ho gayi finally 😃

& our guess was write he's a Secret agent😉

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Very nice

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Awesome chapter..

A marvellous job..👏

Keeping us on the edge of our seets.

Zoya is really brave as she did everything alone..

She knew if she get caught then her life would be at stake..

Brave moves by her..

AsYa meeting...was quite silent one..

Asad realised she is in great trouble as djlhe had to change her look a lot..

Do continue soon..

Looking forward to read more..

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Hey Ashii, glad you liked it dear.

Hahahaha yes Jahanpana bond ki entry hui 😆. Sunday night ko updating 😃

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Finally got the double thrill😉😆😳

It was a brilliant part..

Very very intriguing and very mysterious.

She is smart..

Lol the crime shows teach a lot to the criminals.

Also she recognised one of the voices back at the hideout.

Waiting for the parts to unfold.

Can u like update this everyday..?

Originally posted by: gowtu

Hhmm so asad z a secret agent...
Zoya z really brave nd very smart..
Akeli itna kuch kia usne..

It was so intrstng nd very mysterious updt choco..
Loved reading it..
Awesome part.. Well written...

Excited nd luking frwrd fr next part...
Continue soon

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Wow its so intersting update dear

Pls pls update soon

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Originally posted by: anopama

nice update
so zoya has left the house
she has changed her look
she is really good leaving no trace
so she calls a PI Asad Amhed Khan
wonder what she wants him to do for her
as she has no money to pay him
so asya met lets see what is next
continue soon

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Zoya changed her getup to protect herself. She called detective & that detective was Asad. Finally they met in park. Looking forward for next update soon. Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: -Sathya7n-

Hey... you come back with another Awesome chapter 👍🏼

finally our AAK's entry 🥳

please update soon 😉

Looking forward for next one