New ASYA story: The Eyewitness, Chapter 11, pg 71, 19/01/2016

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2
Im a little confused
But I think I got it now

Lol glad confusion clear hua 😆. Hope you liked it 😳

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: cutie15
This is so thrilling and so interesting. .!
I'm loving this so much..!
This is superb..
next part soon plz plz...
;)

Thanks dear. Glad you liked it 😊 next part definitely by Sunday night 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: ASYAaishu
exciting..!!!!!!!
plz cont sooon...

Thanks dear. Will do 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Thanks lil bro. Hope or well. Aaj kal gayab! Why ?

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: AkaiBara
meee
unres

OMG such a wonderful update

loved it

zoya managed to escape

yeahhh AAK entered in the story

so AAK private detective

AAK 007

looking forward for more update

thanks for pm

cont soon

Hey Ashii, glad you liked it dear.

Hahahaha yes Jahanpana bond ki entry hui 😆. Sunday night ko updating 😃

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: shailu123
wow awesome update👏
zoya is so intelligent 😉
wow asad is an Agent interesting
continue soon😊

Thanks dear. Glad you liked it 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: kobeb
Awesome update:)

Thanks dear. Glad you liked it 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hello Again Choco...
Well I agree with this fact that after watching soo many crime shows in INDIA...you can always get away for a while like a total criminal...because you know their silly tricks...hahahaha
Coming to the update...it was good and well written..
I was wondering...why she has to remove her fingertips from Motel room also...when she is completely changing herself.?
AAK entered the scene...
waiting for it eagerly...continue soon.

Hey Mayur,

Lol you agree with that fact 😆

Well she removed her fingerprints from the motel room just in case the ones out to get her were able to trace her to the motel room. So to further protect herself from them she did this. Hope I was able to clear your doubt 😳