New ASYA story: The Eyewitness, Chapter 11, pg 71, 19/01/2016 - Page 14

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima30
Sooo intriguing
Can't wait to read on

Lol. Glad you're enjoying it. Will update by Sunday 😃

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Hey Choco,
Amazing part. Hmm so there was leak from within the few ppl whi knew her whereabouts cox she can relate to that guy"s voice.

I must say im so impressed with Zoe's thoughtfullness, she really is v intelligent and clever. Hope she stays safe though n no one remembers her at the store. Looking forward to the part where she now talks to Asad. I hope he dsnt hand her over to the custodies ;)

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Hey Nims,

Am so happy that you are enjoying this one too. Yes she's very clever n knows what not to do 😉

Love you too dear bahut bahut saara 🤗

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Azraa01
This is not your usual style, but i love the concept..
Cant wait to see how the story unfolds

Yes this isn't. It's not even my original story and idea. I read it someplace else and couldn't stop myself from imagining asyainnit, so decided to mould it to their characters and post.

Am glad you are liking it 😃

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: smsingh
update please :-(

Sunday night for sure dear 😃

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 9 years ago

Very interesting chapter

finally Asya met

The chapter kept me hooked to it till the last

eagerly waiting for the next chapter

continue soon :')

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Ankita

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome updat dear
finally asad ka entry hua
waiting for next part
continue soon..

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priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome update
i like it
thanks for pm

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A.S.K

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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb part Di...

so finally Asad Ahmed khan here to help her...

Ab aage kya hogaaa ...

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Shama_zz

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Posted: 9 years ago

part 1...

hey choco dee...sorry for late reply...was busy wit xams...

briliantly written part...great start...its soo intriguing...

waiting for asads entry...

coninue soon

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Shama_zz

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Posted: 9 years ago

glad tat zoya escaped cleverly😃

n thanx to t.v shws dey indeed give lot of info to inocent victim as wel as to criminals😆

finally AAK is here...waiting for more

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