Requested ASYA (KaBhi) OS: It's for Mrs Khan

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Wow this was beautiful

For years they were there for each other

They had a pact

Aww they surprised their feelings for so long

So happy with the he mix up even if ayaan did it on purpose

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jazz

@jazmeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

OMG

Did you really wrote on asya again finally

I totally loved it. I missed your writing like crazy

This was beyond perfect

It took me asya heaven which is vanished now

Ur an amazing writer man love you muahhz

Thank you so much for yhr awosome os

Plz write more os/ss plzz.

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

it was a wonderful work dear 👏 👏

loved it very much ❤️ 😳

my god..Victoria scenes 😳 😳

you made me to grin too much 😳 😃

for Mrs khan..haha 🤣 🤣

I thought she really left him 😭 😭

it was a surprise for asad that zoya is with dilshaad.. for me too 😳 😊

first of all ,have to say thanks to ayaan 😊

without him how our asya become closer 😳 👏

very amazing work

hope we can see you with another wonderful work soon 😊😃

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Aashka

@Chillichick

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

I'm totally melting like a hot chocolate!

This was just so ooohhhmmmyyygggaaawwwddd dddaaammmnnn gggoooddd!

Their relationship was truly different!

He actually went to Victoria Secrets for her!

That is definitely worth aaawwwiiinnggg

He definitely was an akdu boss but a cute one at that!

And the way he told Zoya, "You left me all alone in that hotel room"

It broke my heart! But it sounded so deep with emotion to be specific love and Pure love

You have to means YOU HAVE TO SIMPLY WRITE MORE OF THESE!

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Please please please write another part to this!

Doesn't matter what you write so long you write because i know whatever you write will melt me like a jelly!

Please please please please please write more?

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Love love love love it! Reading AsYa again makes me feel so happy. Loved it!

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princess101

@princess101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

just reread this for the 3rd time 😆

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

OMG what an awesome pe blossom OS dear😊

It was super fantastic & welcum back 😃

I remember u used 2 write so amazing FFs on Asya I have read them & Fari aka Princess who used 2 rqst u for updts see I remember😆...so its feels great 2 have u back on writing

& coming 2 OS it was just too brilliant⭐️⭐️

Asad d sadu yet caring Boss...Zoe d sweet but bindaas Secretary

Asad secretly in love wid her & Ayaan knows it that's why d Bhabhijaan comnt 1st I thought mayb they were already married & Zoe was helping him when u wrote he wants her 2 accopny him everywhere cuz he want 2 stay close 2 her than wid Ayaan's entry I thought mayb there mrg was fixed hehe but it was neither d option😆

well thanks 2 Ayaan who played cupid 2 their love story😉

Asya went 4 d meeting...drenched in rain😳...single room😉...than shopping in Victoria Secrets 4 Mrs Khan🤣...than sleeping☺️...Zoe leaving😭...& Asad finding her in his Home cooking wid his Mom awe just like Mrs Khan should have...& d confession in d end❤️...My God there was nothing in it I didn't liked.😛

An absolutely Brilliant 1 wid fresh concept great execution...very gripping intriguing intense passionate & what not...Totally loved it😃👏

& if I can just rqst u to plz continue & write d nxt part😳...Fari make her do that I know u can do that😆😆😉