new** Asya poem drabble ||*Sparks of attraction*|| - Page 3

Banner was lovely...Great for a starter :)

Sorry to say

I didn't lik it

Coz its sad ending😭

And I don't lik kabhi asya sad endings neither do I read any kabhi sad ending story🤢😭

No offence to your writing you wrote as usual beautifully

zoe as a love strucken teen

Crazy about asad

And she even gets his number

Coz he too kind of likes her may be or may not be

She couldn't call him earlier

And when she decided to call

She hears from his sister that he is no more

I kind of didn't lik the idea of asad's death...

And after a period of while even zoe dies

And in reality aisa kon kartha hain ??😲🥱

I mean its modern gen

Why would a gal who is infactuated by a hottie

the gal who never had lot of face to face meetings with the guy

Never had the courage to even call

Would think of dying

I mean modern chicks would just "move on" that's my pov...About modern gen ... no offence

and in this story also I think she was only infactuated and not in love

Coz there was only few encounters about them and only zoya's pov

Anyway's dint lik the death part of asad only..

So sorry to rant...

It just pisses me to read sad endings about the pair I lik

Sorry if I hurt you

I lik sad stories too

Tu gul khan part 2 nikli hate you for killing asad😡😡

not hitting like button😡 coz its terrible to read asya death

ooowww feeling for zoya!!

similar to Hamari adhori kahani!!!

Beautiful Post Suearmaniac!! loved it!!

write more..pm me plz!

Darling sue i dont like sad stories

Beautiful

Aww it was so emotional yar sue

Mujhe rona aa raha tha

But end was sweet end

I loved it lot

I'm feeling so light after reading whole update !