new** Asya poem drabble ||*Sparks of attraction*||

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muh07

@muh07

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Beautifully written

It touched my heart

Really heart touching

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

First of all,how you wrote your Exams?

It was Heart-Touching.😭

The Feelings of Zoya was so Nicely explained.

I can't stop crying after read this.😭

The Banner was so Nice,I likes it.😊

The Poem was Really Heart-Touching.

It was Awesomely wrote.😊

Please write like this on ASYA(KABHI), Poems and Pm to me,I am waiting here.😊

Take care,Dear.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

To My Sweetest Friend,

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Wow sue
Simply loved it
No words described how u feel when ur other half gone forever. It was sad but beautifully written.
Thanks for pm

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ASYAaishu

@ASYAaishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

truly beautiful..

i was literally crying ant end portion.😭😭

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

I love this

I can totally relate to this rn now

Cuz I'm totally crushing on a guy

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

It started off so bubbly.

I thought it was another love story...

But as it went by I was surprised is was a sad one..

It was emotional.

The poem good...

Banner also good.

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

it was very emotional

beautifully written

nice poem

thanks for the pm

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

O.M.G. SUE that was absolutely brilliant 👏👏

Am short of words and that is an achievement yaar. Ek writer ko you put at a loss of words 👏👏. I loved it completely. It was a sad story but touched my heart.

I blushed with Zoya and I cried with her. It even felt like breathing my last with her. You my dear need to take a bow for this exceptionally well written piece.

Want more OS's yaar, its easier for me to read n finish. Time constraint hai naa aaj kal

And lastly, thank you for mentioning Me 😳. Am glad I was an inspiration. Issi bahane, the forum gets another poet 😉

Love you dear 🤗

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asya7

@asya7

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Oh my god surbhi i am speechless. It is just too good. It is brilliantly written. You nailed it dear. Ot was so painful yet so beautiful. I am sad that they died but glad that they reunited in heaven. It was so painful to read zoyas sadness. Their little love story was very very cute. True love.You should write more poem drabbles like this. This is absolutely amazing. I cant explain how much i loved it. You simply rocked🤗
Ps: next time can you write a happy one please? 😃And the edit was simply beautifull. Dont you dare call it crappy 😡