New Thread #2Khamoshiyan chapter11 on pg 49(14/2)

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Wow this was a beautiful update. .
I loved it..
the intensity between them was superbly expressed. .
awesome. .:)

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anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Congrats on new thread

Love the update

Aww Zoya basking in her new feelings

All dress up and went to see him

Only to find him in the arms of another

Poor Zoya her jealousy is cute

Aww Asad seeing her is like fresh air he can breathe

The eye locks were amazing

But Asad is ignoring her

Love atif teasing him

So they r off to a wedding

Mangalpur the all familiar plot

But a different story line and asya fixed it together

Aww he always their to save her and she always thinks him wrong

Hope the night in the room and the journey back brings them closer

Hope love is revealed

Continue soon

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

OMG inna bda updt Lolz 😆

but 1stly congrats 4 d new thread Sum🥳 good job buddy👏

& I just loved d banner its fantastic😛

now coming 2 updt lamba tha aur boht kuch hua😊

Finally Zoe realised & wanted 2 look good while talking 2 him😉

but KV jake uske toh armaan hi sare beh gaye when she saw Asad hugging Smaira

U didn't told me Sam what MA?😕

Khair Attif was flirting wid Zoe & Asad scolded him😆

All left 4 MAngalpur where they enjoyed & also saved d bride

I thoughts goons se bach gaye but while leaving they again attacked Zoe aur Asad ne bchaya use but is sab main they missed d bus & now have 2 share d same room 😉

CAn is get more filmy hehe😆

Just kidding I totally enjoyed d updt😛

Great 1 Sum👏👏 & sorry 4 being super late😳

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--Sumi--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman
mai late ho gai

Late is better than never 😳

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: shailu123
am first

Congo sha 😃😉

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--Sumi--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman
wow Sum long update and amazingly written ! U are becoming good update by update!!
And m loving it...
Zoya in full jelous mode was so awesome.
Poor Asad he is keeping himself away from zoya coz he cant face another rejection..
U presented mangalpur scene in new way and superbly..
Last scene was awesome!
Waiting for next update!
Continue soon

Thank you so much nayab 🤣

It's all manage because of rada 😃

Ya love already have been started now

Zoya also will not stay until will take confession of love 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Kabhibloom
Awesome chapter
Loved it
Liked seeing zoya jealous
Enjoyed their bickering n they shared the same bed, wow
Hope their misunderstanding clear soon

Hey khush

Thank you so much

Ya misunderstanding clear soon

Enjoying holiday 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
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Unres

Congrats on the new thread dear...

N awesome chapter..mangalpur was good too...
Can't write much right now..

Will get back later..

Thank you so much aapi

Ya it's your favorite

I wrote for you 😊

Lots of love to you and shona 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: binuuu
ressy...
I'm super late 😭
kya ho raha hai azu.. 😕
unressy...

nice chapter azu...
again misunderstandings..
hope it clear soon..
wow...they stopped the marriage...
my god, asya is going to share a room..wow...
I hope this mangalpur trip make them realize what each felt for other...
continue soon...

Hey binnu

Thank you so much

Hope you are well now

God bless you

Ya confession on the way 😉😳