AsYa FF ~The Worst Kind of Betrayal ~ Ch 18(Last) Updated on Pg 75 - Page 59

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



I didn't anything much in this story as I wanted to keep it how original was
Even though it was short i realty found their reunion very sweet.
Asad trying to bribe Zoya to come back to him...he thought she'll reject him just like his mother did.
But Zoya didn't 👏


Yes I'm glad too that Zoya dint do that...
Coz she knew this would be the most hurtful thing for him...
N maybe just coz of this point here Asad was forgiven easily..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Oh that scene was in ch 16...when aasad pushes her and she fells down. Zoya goes on her knees and begs him to listen to her. I edited little bit...even I didn't like her begging on her knees.


Ohh that ..

Yes even I dint like in the edited version too...
So it's better u did edit it..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs



Yes I'm glad too that Zoya dint do that...
Coz she knew this would be the most hurtful thing for him...
N maybe just coz of this point here Asad was forgiven easily..


Show some Mercy on him Tehs...He already had enough from all the ladies in his life... 😡 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs



I would say the dark with a little romance I hope..


My vote for the Sweet one..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs



Ohh that ..

Yes even I dint like in the edited version too...
So it's better u did edit it..😊

😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


Show some Mercy on him Tehs...He already had enough from all the ladies in his life... 😡 😆


😆
What he did was also not so good right?

And I agree she was at fault too..
But she should have been given a chance to speak...
Ohh but I want the best for him at the end...

I can't see him paining also so much...
After all he Asad😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


My vote for the Sweet one..


Well I would say the sweet one after the dark...
Like koi kadwi dawai pe kuch meetha khana...

But it's all upon Pia now..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs



😆
What he did was also not so good right?

And I agree she was at fault too..
But she should have been given a chance to speak...
Ohh but I want the best for him at the end...

I can't see him paining also so much...
After all he Asad😳


I don't agree with U on some points.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs



Well I would say the sweet one after the dark...
Like koi kadwi dawai pe kuch meetha khana...

But it's all upon Pia now..


Kadwi toh Zindagi hai..
Isiliye yahan Meetha Dhoondte hai hum..
Hahahhaha..
Its all upto U Pia then. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Will ask u about this tomorrow...
Now I'm very sleepy...
So bye good night n tc...

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