AsYa FF ~The Worst Kind of Betrayal ~ Ch 18(Last) Updated on Pg 75 - Page 57

Originally posted by: anopama

R

Unres

👏

😭

For a job well done for it coming to an end

It will be missed u will be missed every night at 11 pm

Only if u will be coming with something else by tomorrow

Wow wow wow

What an update it was out of this world

What an apology it was a beautiful pure and simple like the confession

If Asad said 10 sentences in tht night he said a lot

It was like the Renee zellwiger line in jerry McGuire "U HAD ME AT HELLO"

1st no leave the star because their is already an angel in the room

2nd go right ahead she had permission to slap him again and do whatever she wants but he was not leaving he was not letting her go

3rd I am sorry I am so sorry

4th I brought you a present

5th please please don't leave me

6th I missed you so much

7th I love you

8th you have to marry me bcuz ppl think I am unstable, I need to get back on tony list,so Mary don't quit and if u want your earrings back from Samar

Zoya was explosive

Get out

Slap

Damn u

Don't touch me

stay away from me

You bas***d

You made me beg

Then his arms his body his heartbeat his words and most of all his gift

Soothe her

Aww so Asad Christmas wish came through in front of the fireplace

but Christmas came 3 days earlier for Zoya

When he made her his wife.

Loved it

Hey Anopama...so glad to know you loved the last chapter and the whole story
It was really simple and sweet but my favorite
I won't let you miss me 😆
Planning to post the new story at the same time ...if not today, tomorrow for sure.
Love Ya for being such an amazing reader 😊

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

😊

I m here too...😊

So glad to see you back here 😊

Originally posted by: nizahairu

Very interesting story
Don't stop writing

Plz continu

Thank you
Realky glad to know you liked it
I'll update a new story soon

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Oh no it has ended
Please write an epilogue at least
You should write more of this
Can't get enough
Was really addicted to this story

Thank you 😊
So glad you've enjoyed reading this story.
I'll start another story very soon

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Like zoya father, who allowed asad to go & meet zoya. All the hurt & miseries finished as two souls confessed their love. Indeed their Christmas was three days ago when they married. Thanks tor beautifully written story. Waiting for new story to start. Thanks once again for pm

Thank you for reading and giving such a lovely feedback.
Really happy to know you've enjoyed this sweet little story
New story coming up very soon 😊

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

It's already the end?😲

I don't want it to end...

😭

It was a very simple n sweet talk between Asya...

Ohh I warmed up to see Asad so vulnerable...

When he allowed her to slap him...go right ahead...

Also the way he bribed her..

And lol the best was the way he listed the things like tony put him off his list and Mary would quit...

Ending was cute too...

But I want en epilogue at least..

Back at the office..

I felt the same way when I read the book.
I didn't want it to end 😭
I wanted to read more.
I love their reunion 😳
Asad 😳 love him so much. I miss AsYa of QH a lot 😭

Originally posted by: Joavssk9

want an epilogue for this. amazingly written. will miss asad and zoya bricking and Samar and zoya chat. women they love their men to the core. zoya one of them. but it was beautiful. asad apology was cute and clean. no fancy apology and long lectures.

please continue with new story if possible. I am addict to your stories :)

Thank you for your lovely comments on this story
I know the end was too abrupt. I wish there was more to read on them 😭
I'll be updating the new story very soon.

Originally posted by: 9849565007

Loved the update. Wish there was more to it

Thank you 😊
So glad you liked it

Originally posted by: -ovi-

awesome update. its simple sweet and beautiful love story ending was so cute waiting for new story please continue soon thanks for the pm

Thank you 😊
I am so glad u liked it.
The end was really sweet 😳
I'll update the new story very soon.

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

I read the last chapter..n yes it was short but beautiful..

U could have put in a little more from your side to r

Make him repent more u know...

I just don't want this to end so soon...

I didn't anything much in this story as I wanted to keep it how original was
Even though it was short i realty found their reunion very sweet.
Asad trying to bribe Zoya to come back to him...he thought she'll reject him just like his mother did.
But Zoya didn't 👏