AsYa FF ~The Worst Kind of Betrayal ~ Ch 18(Last) Updated on Pg 75 - Page 58

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

N I forgot to ask u one thing..

What was the miserable part that Mayur had said earlier which he did not wish to see here..
Did u add it or did not..?



Oh that scene was in ch 16...when aasad pushes her and she fells down. Zoya goes on her knees and begs him to listen to her. I edited little bit...even I didn't like her begging on her knees.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

R u planning to come up with something new?



Oh yeah...I'll update the new story very soon. I have these two stories in mind but can't decide which one to post first. One is a sweet story...the other one is little dark story ???
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

Res
unres
omg omg.. 😲
this was so awesome. . 👏
I loved it..:)
Their longing for each other.. their hug.. their kisses.. ❤️
ahh that was an amazing patch up..
Superb nd a beautiful ending..:)
Thank u soo much for sharing this story..:)



Thank you 😊
I am so glad you liked it.
The end was beautiful 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
finaly got time 2 cmnt.i lv ths amaizing updt.
literaly cried whn zoya beging so tht asad listen 2 her&thn asya's sufering.very beautifuly emoted evry1s emotn.
thnks 2 tony also.
reunion is mindblowing.its lk kid asad who bribed zoya.
lv ths ss so much.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Awesome update

Surely going to miss this story..
Thanks for sharing it with us..
Please keep writing...
😊



Thanks Arpita 😊
I am so glad u liked it
I'll be updating a new story very soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

finaly got time 2 cmnt.i lv ths amaizing updt.
literaly cried whn zoya beging so tht asad listen 2 her&thn asya's sufering.very beautifuly emoted evry1s emotn.
thnks 2 tony also.
reunion is mindblowing.its lk kid asad who bribed zoya.
lv ths ss so much.



Thank you for reading 😊
I am so glad u liked this story so much 😃
The end was so sweet and beautiful 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
cant believe this story ended!
Loved it so much!
Can you please write an epilogue?

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -hotsauce-

cant believe this story ended!

Loved it so much!
Can you please write an epilogue?



Thank you
I am so glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Oh yeah...I'll update the new story very soon. I have these two stories in mind but can't decide which one to post first. One is a sweet story...the other one is little dark story ???


I would say the dark with a little romance I hope..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -hotsauce-

cant believe this story ended!

Loved it so much!
Can you please write an epilogue?


Hotty...
So glad to see u here after so long...

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