AsYa FF ~The Worst Kind of Betrayal ~ Ch 18(Last) Updated on Pg 75 - Page 28

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs



Oh so only few more to go...



Lucky you ...no more studies
How many kids do you have?

After this story is done, I'll probably start with another one 😊
Edited by iluvasya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima30

oh wow!
Poor Zoya...
I love that she spoke the truth about her feelings
Asad was left standing not knowing what to say obviously...

Looking forward to reading the next update
Thank you for the PM



Thank you Fatima for the lovely comment
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Lucky you ...no more studies
How many kids do you have?

After this story is done, I'll probably start with another one 😊


Yes lucky me..
I have 2 kids...
And I will always be here to read your stories..😉😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome part...
Asad turning up at her place..😆
And what a reality check...
Good going Zoya 👏

But from next day the cold AAK...
It was all good...
I guess Abbas must have reached Rosssi and Asad will never get his call n I guess Zoya will be blamed...
Kuch to twist Hona haina...

Will have to wait for one full day...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting part..
PM me also if possible.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jaanu013


Amazing update..

</div>asad and Zoya conversations were nice ...asad doesn't want to acknowledge his feeling for Zoya..he wants her..Zoya ..was honest and told the truth about how she felt for him..she also put out her view clearly about the type of relation she want..Zoya stood strong against asad ..liked her .. continue soon.. <div>



Thanks for reading and commenting
Glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

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U know I love it to bits I don't have to say everytime
So the games has begin i love it this cat and mouse
So lets work I have a file ...yay finally work
but oh no my file
Aww asad flattery will get u everywhere the hair ,name, eyes
glad to see he remembers things abt her
Haha he was shocked seeing he want her job
then she told abt his file she read and what she knew and how she felt
brilliant I am glad zoya is not shriveling up and be sad she is fighting back
glad to see Mary change towards zoya guess she grew on her
aww samar he is pissed asad took his secretary all day now until he wins this game
love the breakfast bit "irritating secretaries"YUM
love the way he teases her and the endearments aww he just cant stop with the compliments
poor zoya want him so bad but she fighting bcuz after all she wnt him for herself no sharing
she want it all physically,emotionally and i will take his naughtiness too
so he is leaving for italy and he wants to bring her a gift ...will he be yearning for her there
I dont believe he has been physical with anyone since zoya (as u comfirm he is not with anaya as he is playing to unite her and samar I guess)
aww asad is is gone but denial god men never wants to admit when they want a woman for more than
s** like embrace it ...it is a lovely feeling
he only desire her ...yeah right
aww the best part the conference call zoya outburst and asad tease and torture
the kiss hmmm😳
then the alone time asad felt proud when he got her to admit she wanted him
but being compared to a monkey not his cup of tea😆
and finally zoya let it out telling him what she wants what she feels and what she would like to happen
aww the bit abt what she did after alibaug😭he was speechless
he would not hurt her but u never know
haha i love the friends bit she throw at him our affair is over so let us be friends now
speechless asad just nod and and strong principled zoya broke down in her car
looking forward for next update
let us see how far u will take them ahead
dreading when he finds her truth and i know u will make it be when he finds love
I am dreading when this story ends because what will I do
so Pia u plz search another amazing novel to converge to asya story.
waiting





So glad to read your feedback.
This chapter was really good too but the end was little sad.
I have few stories in mind which are really awesome. I'll definatly concert one of those to AsYa's version :)
I love reading novels 😆
While reading I always imagine the main characters as AsYa 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
again an awesome updates. zoya is more than anything for asad. he is deeply fall in love with her. gave his valuable possession his grandmother's earrings. loved that part of story. he is confused with his own behaviour. now zoya feeling jealous.he not talking to her n guess he doing it purposely. afraid when Zoya truth is out. hope everything will be fine. n of course thanks for the PM. enjoy your day
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read all there chapters in one go
sorry for not commenting on the previous ones
I m just loving this story more n more
asad is not that bad
he had given his grandmother's earnings to zoya as she had lost hers due to him
I love every bit of this story
Wonderful update
continue soonish :-))
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

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Love the update
So he was in her thoughts during his absence
Love tht she didn't tell nothing to Abbas
Dilshad is so cold hard to believe
She needs money and is contemplating what to do
Oh I was so wondering if he came straight from the airport
But then the earnings being his grandmothers wow
So he has got it bad but he keeps ruining it by just wanting to be in her bed
It is so cute when they tease each other
And his words make Zoya can't resist him
And he was determined she would kiss him
Omg when Zoya lash out she gets nasty
Oh the grow up bit was harsh and she got pissed
Oh boy she told him he is too old and cynical
And now she will do as he preach only with younger men
Oh boy he left and now he has turned into the cold arrogant boss
But he still want her upstairs
She returned the earrings she was touched learning it value to him
Wonder if he did actually lost her but then he don't get attached to anyone or anything
So he coul have lost them or maybe Anaya has them😆
Oh god tanu🤢and he left with her
Wonder if it was lunch and dessert
Or is he going through a celebacy since Zoya
Love Mary he understands Zoya and her feelings
Aww Samar birthday hope Asad join the party
And see the beautiful gift Zoya will be giving to Samar
The sweater she knitted for him
So Zoya has made a decision she is leaving both men on their own
Abbas can do his own dirty work as she can't betray Asad
And Asad as she can't watch him everyday be with other women and not even look at her
So hopefully she moves away from them and forward in her life
Which we know is impossible
As Abbas might out her if he knows she quit and Asad will hate her for her betrayal
Waiting for the next in 23 hrs
Loving it



I really like that he brough his grandmother's earring for her.
She'll find her earring eventually :)
Zoya did the right thing by not telling anything to Abbas.
She wants to quit her job now and find something ekse.
Misunderstanding and drama is bound to happen 😆
Otherwise it will be boring to read .
Asad hates his mom and Abbas, knowing they've sent Zoya...'he'll be pissed
I always look forward to read your feedback
Thanks for this lovely comment
Will update soon :)

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