AsYa FF ~The Worst Kind of Betrayal ~ Ch 18(Last) Updated on Pg 75 - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Joavssk9

just outstanding. I have read this twice and re-reading again. loved Samar Zoya bounding. zoya is too smart for asad. he going to get hell from zoya. don't let asad have zoya easily. just loving asad zoya confrontation. keep it up. thanks for PM. awaiting for the next update :)



Thank you for reading and commenting
Glad u liked it
Zoya won't fall for him so easily now 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: friendsall

Waiting for tomorrow morning for ur next update



Lol ok 😆
Will update around the same time :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rosamale

I absolutely love this story. but i really do hope that Zoya wont fall for his charms just because of the sexual tension. Asad needs a lesson.



Thank you for reading and commenting
Glad u liked this part.
Zoya has already fallen for his charm but it won't be so easy for Asad to get back to her :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome work..
In love with the story...Loved this Zoya who stood up for herself n her answers...
You are awesome writer...
Actually my exam started today..
So after returning this is the first thing I read..
Do continue soon..
Will be waiting..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

R😉

Unres😊

What can I say in Samar words magnificent
Zoya was amazing the girl was on fire omg boy did she tell him
So she has to work with Asad for 3 wks just great luck
Hahaa he thought she came to apologize
Boy she definitely has a mouth on her a mouth Asad can't resist
Haha he fired her and rehired her
And he said sorry he would have said anything to get what he wanted
A sleazy affair and our Zoya is not like tht
Omg she would bring her daughter for him to initiate her
But darling Zoya u will can't do tht as it will be his daughter too😉😉
Aww Samar thank god for him he came to the rescue as soon as he saw Zoya would have cave
He knows Asad well so he knew he was pulling out the big guns
He can't do anything but think abt her ...wow😆
Men they would say anything to get what they want
So Samar,Asad and Anaya went back a far way
At lease tht is good for Zoya Samar can help her know abt Asad and keep her in check
Well Asad Asad Asad what can I say u want to hate him but u can't u just love him and can't stop loving him
Aww u want to redeem Asad in our eyes so u give him his pov
Don't worry we always love even when he is bad
I know Zoya got to him since the first night he saw her without mud
Tht is y the abrupt call to the security to take her away
She got under his skin he warned himself to stay away but he couldn't
Then alibug happened and it got worst he pushed her and never intended to see her ever
Until she was knock dead gorgeous at his party and had men drool on her all night
And he was invisible the Man U took her virginity
And now he wants more of her and she is not willing and he is getting a challenge form his best friend too
Aww u want me to go all goo goo for Asad with tht amazing part of each the want to do with Zoya and teach her and show her
Aww I know they can be amazing lovers
Aww he thinks of an affair might hurt her if it ends he doesn't want to hurt her😭
But he can't step back it is too late he tasted her and he just can't seems to get enough and he wants more and it seems as if a line of men wants her too but he will make sure he gets her
Bcuz she wants him too
Well he is already establishing feelings for her even though he hasn't acknowledge it yet
And soon the possessiveness will start where he will can't even see her talking with another man
Then will come the most amazing felling love .
Looking forward for tonite at 11 pm my time for an update .
Love it and craving for more



I told you this chapter was the best 😊
Zoya was so good in her fiery mode. Bechara Asad couldn't get through her.
Samar was like icing on the cake. I love this dude. He knows Asad too well 😆
So glad you enjoyed this chapter. Next chapter at the same time :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Awesome work..

In love with the story...Loved this Zoya who stood up for herself n her answers...
You are awesome writer...
Actually my exam started today..
So after returning this is the first thing I read..
Do continue soon..
Will be waiting..



Thanks Arpita
Glad u liked this chapter
Oh dear, please don't embarrass me. I can only wish to write so good 😆
The entire credit for the writing goes to the Author Judith McNaught who has written this novel.
I am only presenting in AsYA's version.
Thanks again Arpita 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapter..thnx for the asad's pov..he was attracted her at the first sight..wanted to stay away from Zoya..but they went to alibagh..even he apologised to her for his behaviour at the farmhouse..he was totally smitten by her..may be developed a soft corner for her..beautifully written chapter..loved it...
waiting for their love story to begin...
waiting for tomorrow morning update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
What a fire cracker Zoya is! That was a brilliant update
Asad is going to have a hard time seducing Zoya again
But he seems confident!
Can't wait to read on

Thank you for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jaanu013


Awesome chapter..

</div>thnx for the asad's pov..he was attracted her at the first sight..wanted to stay away from Zoya..but they went to alibagh..even he apologised to her for his behaviour at the farmhouse..<div>
he was totally smitten by her..may be developed a soft corner for her..beautifully written chapter..loved it...
waiting for their love story to begin...
waiting for tomorrow morning update...



Thanks for the lovely comment 😊
Glad u liked this chapter.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima30

What a fire cracker Zoya is! That was a brilliant update
Asad is going to have a hard time seducing Zoya again
But he seems confident!
Can't wait to read on

Thank you for the PM



Thanks 😊
Glad u liked it.
Zoya was bang on 😆 bechara Asad kuch nahin Kar paya 😆

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