AsYa FF ~The Worst Kind of Betrayal ~ Ch 18(Last) Updated on Pg 75 - Page 24

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Posted: 9 years ago
U are giving me a very bad habit now...
To wait for your update every morning...šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
I would like to know your name too...
What is your name?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

Res😊

Unres
Finally
As usual I love the update
Firstly I thought it's his plan for her to work with him but it's destiny
Oh boy I love that, so much
he thought she was there to say sorry to him so self centered or fellow
He's fired her and rehired her but I love the part outside elevator very much that was very funny
Finally it's revealed what's on asad's mind
I love you zoya the way you say him no leaving him all the more desperate
Samar you so cute
You are so helpful to her into every sense
he is always there when she needs him
he decided to intervene when he felt that she was getting weak
Right now I feel like he's an angel for asya love story
Oh boy asad thought thert He is also interested in her n competitor to him
But he is so determined that he would convince Zoe for the arrangement so desperate and so selfish
But I don't think this time she fall for him so easily.
Lots of going on in my mind...what's gonna happen next
What will he do
I guess I will miss him as he is going out of town
Samar did not mention why their engagement was broken
It's going to be chase and run going on or something new going to happen
How he gonna react when he find out that she is spy...so curious so excited
Update soon
Don't forget to Res before you maxed out😊



I read your feedback and totally forgot to reply.
So glad u enjoyed this chapter as it's my favorite.
That elevator scene is really good. I always laugh reafong that scene.
Samar is too good in this story. I loved his entry ruining Asad's monent with Zoya šŸ˜†
Hmmm her being a spy is not realkt good for her. Asad is will not take that lightly šŸ˜•
There has to be done twist in the story after all šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

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When it started I thought it is another run and chase
Loved the way samar was annoyed when asad ask for zoya in his office in the morning
I loved their nokjhok and the way he asked her to bring him his breakfast from coffee shop
He is trying his best for het to agree to have an affair with him
Love the way they were behaving professionally for some time
Finally it's the time for a moment of truth for asad.
He knows that she want him to and he was taking advantage of that thing
but she turned the tables by telling him that she want him
but she does not want him to hurt her which she was very sure that he will do knowingly or unknowingly
She wants very much clear and I can feel her pain in whatever she said about his relationship with other female
She made sure that she can only be in a relationship with emotions. She will attached herself but he can't
And she is not ready for another heartbreak
I was very happy that she told him what she has gone through after she left from alibaug.
It was kind of a reality check for him that he can't have everything he also needs to do some compromise and changes
Now I want to see how much he is ready to change himself for her as he has already find some feelings for her
I guess the time he will be away from home he might realize something and we can see a completely changed person who is coming back from Italy
I have seen this flirt asad. Now I wanna see a completely different asad who is deeply madly crazyly in love
I am so excited for next update
Thanks for the update dear and thank you very much for sharing the story with us



Woh Asad hai...don't be so sure...he'll not change so fast šŸ˜†
He is too afraid to commit...he doesn't want to be emotionally involved.
You'll understand and sympathize with him a little once you learn about his past.
He is falling for her but doesn't want to admit.
Don't forget she has come as a spy too...once Asad finds out ...hell willl rise šŸ˜†
Thanks for this lovely comment.
Will update tomorrow same time :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: friendsall

Had tears reading v the last last of this chapter...beautifully put thru



Thank you
Glad u liked it.
Sorry to make you cry
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Joavssk9

hmmm. feeling bad for Zoya but she is strong n asad will change.nicely written. thanks for the PM.



Thank you
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

It was a wonderful chapter...

I enjoyed reading it right from the word go...
The start was good...
Angry Samar was good..

Mary and her changed attitude good..
Lol he likes irritating secretaries very good...
The professional part in between was nice..
But lol the three whats during the call was funny...
The stolen kiss in between the call was nice...

Asad already realized there is something more than desire...

And coming o the best part now...
She even wanted the monkey...lol seriously I would have loved to see the reaction..šŸ˜†

But after that the truth Zoya said out loud was amazing...
Felt sad for her ..



Thank you for this lovely feedback 😊
Glad u liked the chapter
Asad can't seems to keep himself away from her.
He's trying his best to keep her in front of him.
The three guys saying 'what' on the phone was funny.
The kiss was adorable too 😳
Yeah she really wanted and monkey and got one too šŸ˜†
Bechara Asad, she compared him to monkey šŸ˜†
Will update next ch tomorrow same time :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

U are giving me a very bad habit now...

To wait for your update every morning...šŸ˜‰



Ha ha ha šŸ˜†
Hey, that's not a bad habit. I've been updating regularly without fail.
Will continue doing it.
I am excited to know you guys are loving this story 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

I would like to know your name too...

What is your name?



My name is Pia. I'm in Los Angeles?
How about you? What's your name?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

You did a great job..ā­ļøšŸ‘



Thank you Arpita 😊
Really happy to know that you liked this chapter :)

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