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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved this..! Update soon..:)
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Originally posted by: falala333

Awww😳
That's so sad but sweet too!!
Asya are separated but Sanam and Seher want to stay with them and take care of them!!
Looking forward to the next part of this story😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatima30

This is so intriguing
Can't wait to read on


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Originally posted by: nilusoni

awesome start

asya got separated
excited for updates
plz pm me for next part
continue soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

Mumbai

Seher was a very loving person. She cared for everyone she knew. At 25 years of age she worked at a managerial position in the HDFC bank. She was very efficient at her work. Her colleagues all praised her. She was very gentle hearted. She understood the troubles of her juniors and helped them in every way she could. She was loved and respected by all. She had everything in her life any girl at that age would have wanted. The only thing she did not have was the love of a man.

Seher was in her room working on a presentation. "Ouch!" She screamed when a pillow hit her. She looked up and saw her best friend standing at the door. "Ye kya tha? Kyun maara mujhe?" "Kyunki tune meri darling ko rulaya. Kyun karti hai aisa yaar? You know how much she loves you." "Haan par why does she talk about my marriage? Mujhe nahi shadi karni." "Kyun nahi karni? Seher, koi do log ek jaise nahi hote hain, koi rishta ek doosre jaisa nahi hota. Zaroori nahi hai jo aunty aur tumhaare baba ke beech hua wo tumhaare rishtey mein bhi ho." "Main shadi nahi karoongi waise bhi koi ma laadla nahi bana jo mujhse shadi kare." "Seher, kaisi language use karti ho tum! Ladki ho tum." "Accha ladki hoon main? Tumhe kaise pata? Peaky peaky kiya?" Seher smiled naughtily. "Seher!" "Ahil!" They engaged in a pillow fight. The whole room was in a mess within no time. Seher and Ahil fell on the bed laughing.

"Waise mujhe shadi iss liye nahi karni kyunki mere jaane ke baad mamma akeli ho jaayengi." "Koi akeli nahi hongi. Main hoon na meri darling ke liye. Waise bhi tum jaaogi na toh unka saara pyar mujhe milega. Jao na yaar koi toh bana hoga tumhaare liye!" Ahil gave her a slight push. "Oh really and jab tumahri wife aayegi tab? Tab kya wo akeli nahi reh jaayengi? Nahi Ahil main shadi nahi karoongi." Seher began to tidy the room. "Waise mere paas ek idea hai jiss se tumhaari shadi bhi ho jaayegi aur aunty akeli bhi nahi rahengi." Seher looked at Ahil. "Shadi aur tumse? Kabhi nahi." "Ae! Tujh jaisi item se main bhi shadi na karoon. Pagal kutte ne nahi kata mujhe." "Haan tumhe toh 17th century ke virus ne infect kiya hai. Tumhe toh seedhi saadhi sati-savitri jaisi behenji chahiye na?" Seher teased Ahil.

"Behenji nahi biwi chahiye. I don't mind if she is a working woman but accha lagta hai jab biwi shauhar ka khayal rakhti hai. Jab main office se aaoon wo balcony mein khadi ho mera intezaar karti hui. Mere doorbell bajane se pehle daudkar aaye aur mere liye darwaza khole. Mera meri cheezon ka khayal rakhe. Jo mujhse pyar kare jisse main karoon aur pyar ke sahare hum apni poori zindagi guzar de. Aur haan sabse badi baat she should know how to cook food aur tum toh theek se pani bhi boil nahi kar sakti. Bechara wo ladka jisse tumhaari shaadi hogi. Bhookha marega." Seher began hitting Ahil. After some time he caught her hands. "Stop!"

Ahil and Seher went out to the garden and sat on the swing. "Waise idea kya hai jisse meri shadi bhi ho jaaye aur mamma bhi akeli nahi rahenge?" Seher asked taking a bite of her favorite chocolate. "Aunty ka akelapan door kar do. Unki zindagi mein unka partner hoga toh tumhari meri shadi ke baad wo akeli nahi rahengi." Ahil smiled as he was proud of his idea. "Teri toh meri mamma ki doosri shadi ki baat karta hai! Mere liye doosra baap laane ki baat kar raha hai!" Seher picked up a stick and began hitting Ahil. "Arre main naya baap nahi puraane wale ko wapas laane ki baat kar raha hoon." Seher dropped the stick. She stared at Ahil as if he had gone bonkers.

"Ahil are you mad? Aisa kaise ho sakta hai? Mamma and baba split 22 years ago. Mamma ghar se chali gayi baba ne unhe roka nahi. Mamma kabhi wapas nahi gayi aur na baba ne unhe wapas bulaya. Hum kaise unhe milayenge? Jab 22 years mein koi wajah nahi thi unko paas aane ka toh ab kya hai?" "Tum. Seher husband wife alag ho jaate hain par ma baap nahi. Duniya ki hazaar reasons unhe door kar deti hain par sirf ek wajah unki aulaad kaafi hoti hai unhe wapas milaane ke liye. Seher tum fikar mat karo main hoon na." Seher put her head on Ahil's shoulder and closed her eyes.

Ahil was Seher's best friend her only friend. He was 3 years older than her. He was her friend and also filled the place of her brother. At times he would also take on the role of her father when she was broken down and cried for her father. He used to sing a lullaby for her and make her sleep when she had nightmares. Ahil, was an orphan. He was Zoya's best friend Lubna's son. Lubna and her husband had passed away in a car crash. Ahil was placed in Zoya's care. She brought him up as her own. Ahil, Seher and Zoya made a small lovely family but an incomplete one.

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Bhopal

Sanam was the 25 year old executive chef of Karma restaurant of Le Meridian Bhopal. She was her father's princess. She was very bubbly. She loved to cook but more than that she loved to laugh and fill everyone else's live with laughter. She was an artist in the kitchen creating one master piece after another. She took care of her father like a mother takes care of her son. She had a lot of friends. She tried to fill the void in her life with friendship. Sanam obeyed her father. She was the perfect daughter. She did everything Asad asked and sometimes without asking too. The only thing she refused was to get married.

Sanam was in her room working on her cook book. She saw the lights in the kitchen switch on. She came out of the room. "Ye aap kya kar rahe hain? Mujhe bula liya hota main khana garam kar deti." "Jee nahi, main kar loonga. Tum jab apne sasural jaaogi na tab wahan sabke liye garma garam khana banana aur khilana." "Nahi main shadi nahi karoongi. Aur ye baat maine aapke hero ko bhi aaj saaf saaf keh di hai." Sanam began making hot rotis. "Kya gudiya, kyun karti ho tum aise? Tum jaanti ho na wo tumhe hasta basta dekhna chahte hain. Shadi karne mein kya problem hai? Tum kisi ka ghar basaane jaogi, accha kaam hota hai ya aur acche kaam ko mana nahi karte." "Accha toh aap ye accha kaam kyun nahi karte?" Sanam asked with a pleasant smile but it faded as she saw him in tears.

"Sanam, shadi karna galat faisla nahi hota hai. Shadi khushiyaan deti hai. Sanam main jaanta hoon ki tum mamu se ye kehti ho ki tum unhe akela nahi chodna chahti iss liye shadi nahi karogi but main janta hoon ki tumhe shadi karke pyar karke uss pyar ko khone ka darr hai. Lekin Sanam har shadi ek jaisi nahi hoti shadiyaan acchi nibhti hain especially jab uss shaadi mein Rehan na ho." "Rehan bhai!" Sanam cupped Rehan's face. "Jo galti aapne ki nahi kyun khud ko uske liye doshi manate hain. Baba ne mamma ko blame kiya mamma ne unki baat dil par le li! Mamma ne ghar se bahar kadam nikala baba ne unki taraf apne kadam nahi badhaye. Baba ne mamma ko laut kar aane ko nahi kaha aur na kabhi mamma wapas aayi. Aap ek chote bacche the Rehan bhai aap sirf 7 years ke the aapki koi galti nahi hai. Aur ab kabhi khud ko blame kiya na toh main aapse baat nahi karoongi." Sanam gave Rehan an angry look. He held his ears and began doing sit ups. Sanam burst out laughing.

Sanam and Rehan were on the terrace. They looked down and saw Asad writing something in his diary. "Baba ko aise akela dekhkar khud ka ghar basane ka mann nahi karta. Baba apni har choti badi baat ke liye mujhpar dependent hai aise mein main kaise. Unhe meri zaroorat hai." Sanam wiped her tears. "Sanam unhe tumhaari nahi ek jeevan saathi ki zaroorat hai." "Jeevan saathi? Rehan bhai aap baba ki doosri shadi ki baat kar rahe hain?" Sanam could not believe it. Rehan who thought himself to be responsible for Asad and Zoya's break up who every night cried himself to sleep praying to Allah to get them back together was thinking about Asad's second marriage.

"Sanam tum na har lihaz se mamu par gayi ho par intelligence ke maamle mein pata nahi..." "Haw Rehan bhai baccha na apne baba ya ma par jaata hai agar main baba jaisi nahi toh main mamma jaisi hoon. Aap mamma ko unintelligent keh rahe hain?" Rehan pulled her ear for making fun of him. "Sanam, Asad mamu ke liye Zoya mami se zyaada perfect aur koi nahi ho sakta. Main mamu ki second marriage ki nahi unki pehli aur ek lauti biwi se reunion ki baat kar raha hoon." "Lekin ye kaise ho sakta hai?" "Tumhaare liye. Mamu chahte hain na ki tum shadi karo toh unse kaho ki pehle wo apna ghar basaye. Tum tension free hokar shadi kar logi." Sanam jumped with excitement. "Rehan bhai isi baat par gulab jamun ho jaaye." She stuffed a big gulab jamun in Rehan's mouth.

"Haan, mamma baba ek ho jaayenge meri shadi ho jaayegi aur phir hum aapki dulhan le aayenge." "Sanam tum bhi na." "Rehan bhai aap kitna sharmaate hain. Aapke liye toh na koi bindaast ladki chahiye. Ek dum item." Rehan rolled his eyes. "Haan aur tumhe koi aisa husband jo din bhar apni biwi se khidmatein karwaye. Khana banao, shirt press karo, khidki par khade rehkar meri raah tako type ka banda." "Haan toh ismein kya galat hai?" "Haan toh meri item mein bhi kya galat hoga?" Sanam and Rehan both laughed.

Rehan was a sweet simple boy. He was hard working and worked with Asad's construction firm. He was Asad's sister Najma and brother in law Imran's son. Najma and Imran had passed away in a tragic accident. Asad had brought a seven year old Rehan home. Rehan and Sanam grew up together as siblings. They loved and cared for each other. Rehan was Sanam's best friend and she was his. Together they took care of Asad and his broken heart. Rehan, Sanam and Asad were a little lovely family but incomplete.

**

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update
Loved reading it
Finally aahil and rehan come into the picture
Looking forward to know how they meet and the story after
Please try to continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WoW!
Chahat, it was brilliant! ...I loved it!
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Originally posted by: zoyazrehan

WoW!

Chahat, it was brilliant! ...I loved it!
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Thank you so much

Nahi you are still on my PM list

I have send them out as yet

Will send them tomorrow
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Originally posted by: PizzaHolic.

Such an amazing storyline :o
Do pm me ^_^
Waiting .
Too exited šŸ˜†


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very interesting but i didn't got any pm

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