AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76 - Page 5

Wow shreya di ur narrative style is so good... i love how u gave the details about each and everything of that era and the scenario was so perfect...

So mahira is introduced... with lateef and mir baksh.. nice.. waiting to read the story further.. and how the characters is going to be explored...
thanks for the PM..

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Beautifully narrated Shreya...😊 So the story set in Mughal backdrop..very intriguing plz update soon...

Originally posted by: PurpleCrayon

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haww braces ! kyu ? u teeth are not in line ? u have a lovely smile, though !

Originally posted by: ifians

Wow shreya di ur narrative style is so good... i love how u gave the details about each and everything of that era and the scenario was so perfect...

So mahira is introduced... with lateef and mir baksh.. nice.. waiting to read the story further.. and how the characters is going to be explored...
thanks for the PM..

yes, I am going to introduce a number of new characters . so I am wondering do I have to write a list of characters and introduce them in brief on the 1st page. Is the story appearing too tough to approach ?
Ria, plz thik kore bhebe bol. coz it was always my dream to write a Historical fantasy story. I am living my dream now and I dnt want to do any blunder 😃

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

yes, I am going to introduce a number of new characters . so I am wondering do I have to write a list of characters and introduce them in brief on the 1st page. Is the story appearing too tough to approach ?
Ria, plz thik kore bhebe bol. coz it was always my dream to write a Historical fantasy story. I am living my dream now and I dnt want to do any blunder 😃

Di satti balbo... ami mane kari jee character list bananor kono darkar nei...make them introduce with the ongoing story.. cause i think it will be more interesting to read then... just like surprise packet...aar ta chara amar mane hay... reader der nijeder bhabar janno kichu material rakhte hoy...aar jakhon new character introduce habe storyline er sathe takhan reader sei bhabar space ta pave.. it will intend them to think how the character will be explored... etc etc... amar too etay mane hay.. ebar jaa tomar bhalo mane hay...

Originally posted by: -enchanted-

I am not too much into FFs and that too historical ones, but I will surely give this one a try. The story seems pretty interesting and the description of that era is real I like your narrative style. Such FFs require a lot of effort so all the best to you. Good thing is I can actually imagine AzMa in such era. Especially Rajbeers features have this old world appeal about them, very timeless. And I can picturize Surbhi too.

saach bolu toh I cannot imagine QH's current storytrack in present timeline...like poolside party, girls in skimpy clothes and crystal ball gazing, evil spirits rising, girl with mysterious power, lost in forest,cursed prince to her rescue, stufs dont really go along !
thank u for ur encouragement. even though u dnt like historical stuffs, u read it 😃

Originally posted by: ifians

Di satti balbo... ami mane kari jee character list bananor kono darkar nei...make them introduce with the ongoing story.. cause i think it will be more interesting to read then... just like surprise packet...aar ta chara amar mane hay... reader der nijeder bhabar janno kichu material rakhte hoy...aar jakhon new character introduce habe storyline er sathe takhan reader sei bhabar space ta pave.. it will intend them to think how the character will be explored... etc etc... amar too etay mane hay.. ebar jaa tomar bhalo mane hay...

I ditto think the same, bcoz i like reading my story this way, kintu annora jodi ettogulo new characters dekhe bokka khay 😆

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

I ditto think the same, bcoz i like reading my story this way, kintu annora jodi ettogulo new characters dekhe bokka khay 😆

Arey kichu bokka khabena.. u just write the way u feel comfortable and convinced... cause i think before the readers, the writer have to be satisfied with her works, and then she can give her 100% to any story...so tension nio na... just lekho..😆

Originally posted by: sageflower7

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waiting ... ... ... for chocolating 😆