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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -enchanted-


PS- Did you notice that your Character list mentions every character from Azad to Adaq and Ghazala to Shiraj, yet our protagonist Mahira is conspicuous by her absence.



what what what !!!😲
After 8 chapters you r telling me I dont have my lead lady's name in the list of characters ??
cant believe my callousness 😡. will add it soon 😛

But then again, do I really have to introduce her ??

she is us ! we are having vicarious pleasure of adventure,romance and hardship through her... we all step ourselves in her shoes when we read and imagine the scenes...you,my sweet readers, U r all Mahiras. And count me on that list too ! She is the key to our wish fulfillment. so what do I write about her ? .
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: noesha

Loved it! Aawww Dreamy Azaad is soo cute!

Cant wait to see what happens next ! _

Update soon!


thank u !
oii where is the promised long review ??😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aahana.

wow awesome chaptrrr

this chaptr was fully azzad's pov
loved his jealousyyy
bichara kithna jal raha hainn he cant even see amaad's flirting and giving flower to mahii
he is in loveee
love is in the airrr
adaq learns about azzad's restlessness
loved adaq teasing azzad
bichara azzad couldn't hide his new emerged feelings from his father lik figure adaq
azzad just wants adaq to keep an eye on mahira
ohh so ghatiyaaa amaad ne kiski maid ko pregnant kiya thaaa😡😡
so cheap
she died giving birth to that kid
hmm may be that small kid which you mentioned is amaad's
now bichara azzad does not want the same fate for mahiraa
hmm mahira gets a strange dream of azzad saying you are not needed bichari even thought of kissing him in her dreams that is sinfull😉
hmm azzad's father committed suicide
may be he loved someone else
and may be azzad is not the son of that witch begum sahiba
hmm loved mahira climbing the tree to peep into that south tower window part
🤣


sadly azad is indeed the son of badi begum. arre she was not like this before. something happened to her after the fire she changed. and nehi that small kid we met earlier is not amad's. thank god for that.😆
Mahira's dreams are hot ! ab bechari kya kare repressed emotions come alive in her dream and she wakes up in sweat and tears...bechari blaming herself for having immodest dreams of a man little knowing that man is also having torturous pasionate dreams of her 😆...aag dono taraf i acche se lag chuki hai😆
Mahira is trying be tarzan 😆 she wanted to peep through that window...ladki ka dimag mein baas azad hai...she has to see whatz in his bed room...koi mistress wagera toh nehi hai ...u know silly feminine curiosity and meaningless jealousy 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
When is the next one coming up shreya?😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update
loved it
thnx a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago

Sings "Vaada kiya toh nibhana padega..."

*logs into IF...Hmmm..Rutba Rutba kahaan re tu..ok Pg 2of forum...chap 8..pg 60*

*rubs hand* all set..wait...*runs to get the oxford dictionary*

Ok..now all ready...

*and the dictionary swings into action*..

Oooh..Loved the sword scene..*dreamy eyes..thinks of Hrithik in Jodha Akbar*.Crafted to carve out the essence of life from layers of shields and armors. Loved this line.

Douchebag Amaad!! Just like the dog's tail...ladki dekhi aur line maarna shuru...Ever since our TV wala Amaad forcing himself on M scene, whever Amaad comes to mind its onky that scene. But if u watch that scene, Ankit did a good job actually..even Surbhi.

Ahahahahaha..What was thw hero doing there in the first place? Spying on Mahira? So our miya is fearful that Amaad would advantage of her. Azad miya..toh dher kis baat ki..b4 the slimeball makes a move, bring her to our side (*cough* jahaan Azaad wahaan main)

*randomly sings Allah Meherbaan toh dil gul-e-gul gulistaan*

Uff..bandha had to take lot of effortsto calm himself down..Wahaan woh extreme long breaths, aur mein yahaan hyperventilation.

@&%#%$ Amaad.Cant keep it in his pants eh?Oh sh!t..poor girl & child.Keede pade tujhe!!

Poor L & M..kaand Amaad kare aur sazaa inhe!!

Hayee..thinking of Mahira..awww*Bursts out into ... yeh kya hua, kaise hua, kab hua, kyon hua, jab hua, tab hua, oh chodo, yeh na socho yeh kya hua*

Hawww...abhi se hi he is thinking of kissy kissy..aage aage wicked wicked..My poor Shreya's hormones doing the garba!!

Overambitious forefather?Buddhe ne kya kiya?

Hein..what an eyesight!! Garden se hi dekhliye her loose tendrils !! Hmm..*strains to imagine that* (If he has such an eyesight to notice this from far, toh huzoor ek glance idhar bhi..Will completely let down my hair like chudail for him)

to savor that rare pleasure of being admired by a beautiful woman. Liked this one too!!

I love love love yun hi re song!!

Aww..Adaq Chacha..He sure knows to tease someone!! That scene was well written.

...look of a boy caught redhanded with a jar of pickle??? More like, Amy caught with a jar of Nutella at midnight.

Shreya and her pbsession with male aroma!! Tu abhi bataa...kahaan milenge yeh aroma...Amazon/Walmart mein??

I loved the second song or more aptly line selection ..perfect for the scene.

So this was the change...the Begum became cold and distanced after the fire??

Oh.oh..*eyes widen*..*jaw drop*..*gasps* *tongue out* *imagines scenario*..Mahira neeche and woh upar!! Uh-oh..legs still exposed. Azaad ne chua kya? Ye lo, phir se male aroma..

Best scene in this update is Adaq-Azaad (I am biased towards our Chachajaan)

Edited by _AmyChoco_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am obsessed with male aroma! ! Am I ?? AM I? ?

Haye Allah !! Yeh kyaa sun rahi hoon main !!

** Runs to drown in chullu bhar paani**

** returns back after a second thought***
or what if I really am ????😳

i have hypersensitive nose, u know, in real life...i detect faintest of faint scents...subtle khusboo of flowers, perfumes,and very faint odours repulses me ...so who knows may be I will really behave a la lady of WILD STONE DEO if pure male elixir whafts through my nostrils, eh Amy ??
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lCAGaPCub30[/YOUTUBE]
😆This is for u guys who havent seen the mentioned advertisement 😆

Edited by milinda.shreyz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Di, my pyari di... first of all..🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 from my side... ki likhecho eta?!!!... mane what is this?!!... Are u kidding me?!! is this really your first fiction?!!😲😲...

Di where is your feet?!! i wanna touch them and if possible i wanna kiss those hands who can create such awsome masterpiece👏👏👏... I have no words... Bow down lady... you are making me the cray fan of your intense writing and description...⭐️⭐️

Ami satti balchi... amar pakhe ei chapter er review dewa JUST IMPOSSIBLE!! kichu balar nei?!!kono bhasa nei... I can't express the overwhelming feeling this chapter's each and every line given me...they are all shinning like diamonds... congratulation lady.. you have emerged into a tremendous writer within a very small time span!!👏👏

and you used one of my fav song yun hi re... god okhanei too ghayal kare diyecho... i am continuously imagining this song on AzMa this days and planning for a VM...

and sorry di i was again late... but its not my fault now..😭... you know i read this chapter again and again... Almost 10 times!!!!😆😆... and i get lost in it everytime...... its just magic!! A PURE MAGIC!!! that touches the deepest cord of anyone's heart and give a brightest smile to anyone's face...

Will be eagerly waiting to read the next chapter... sorry for my pagal cray outburst of emos...😆😆... what to do, i am such a emotional girl bahut jaldi bahe jati hoon..🤣

Di please next chapter jaldi jaldi update karo... nahale i will end up reading it 20 times... 😆😆

PS: And also special mention to your editor... she is doing fantastic job i say... u both are putting your best in the story and etching out the finest design out of stone..applause for both of you!!👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

I am obsessed with male aroma! ! Am I ?? AM I? ?


Haye Allah !! Yeh kyaa sun rahi hoon main !!

** Runs to drown in chullu bhar paani**

** returns back after a second thought***
or what if I really am ????😳

i have hypersensitive nose, u know, in real life...i detect faintest of faint scents...subtle khusboo of flowers, perfumes,and very faint odours repulses me ...so who knows may be I will really behave a la lady of WILD STONE DEO if pure male elixir whafts through my nostrils, eh Amy ??
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lCAGaPCub30[/YOUTUBE]
😆This is for u guys who havent seen the mentioned advertisement 😆




OMG DI!!!!...tomar ei abastha?!!🤣
Edited by BabyHimavari - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Editor sahiba, Bhag gayi ria ! Now I am on my own.
On the other hand,kruti says I Dnt need her editing anymore,although I Dnt trust her.

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