AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76 - Page 48

Originally posted by: ZoyaAsad2

AWESOME👏 Love the chapter nd the others also

BTW Yun Hi Re is alos my fav song nd it has an amazing meaning behind it 😃

Looking foward for Azaad nd Mahira raomancing ❤️

Keep up the amazing job👍🏼 nd update soon

Originally posted by: PurpleCrayon

I LOVED the opening! How he's sharpening the blade and your description of the deadliness of the weapon. This by far my favorite chapter beginning.
Ah men and their long curved swords [no pun intended] !! I hav a real thing for fine fencers /swordsmen 😆 and archers ☺️
**Reminisces JodhaAkbar movies famous sword practice scene and dies **
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B0-6An5X6tU[/YOUTUBE]

Food for your thought , Baisa : what was azad wearing when he was shaprening his hereditary sword ?? he was furious,frustrated and vulnerable all in same time...was he ermm wearing anything except his paijama😆??
Lord ! that TS has totally khiskaoed my brain !

I've always been a fan of naming weapons, probably because of LOTR.😳 So he finds this seemingly mundane task soothing, instead of going on a murderous rampage?

yaa, he is not inclined to violence that much if it is not absolutely necessary, he is a just man...when he gets irritated he doesnot jump into gunblazing, here sword-whirling he is like shimmering underneath the veneer of calm composure.



I'm sure he looks no less deadly sharpening that blade with anger simmering just under the surface.
Dead Hawt and bow chicka wow wow🤣 I have lost it, yes dnt ask plz !!

I concur with Azaad.. Rip Amaads arms off and feed them to any junglee janwar, bechare Shiraz ki tabiyat kharab kyun kare.😆. I'm so pissed at tv wala Amaad (good job Ankit) that yeh FF wala Amaad ka naam chid jaye bas, maarne ka dil hota hai.

i would say Ankit dude is doing his job more efficiently that our illustrious heroji ! esp today he was totaly overshadowed.

So Amaad fathered a child and the poor thing died at birth. So that rules out the little girl being his.. Or does it? Lol. He may have little ones running around all over the place. At least one mystery is solved.. The hunting of young maidens. That cad Amaad!!😡

no, that little girl was not fathered by him...but about others well who knows kahan kahan he has sown his wild oats😆

And no u now realise why the villagers were pelting at lautif-mir baksh on the 1st chapter ?

Azaad seems to have inherited the curse? Hmm.. Naseers cryptic lines in the book make me think that KB was posssed or turned evil after the fire. That, added to the weight and Misery of the curse made him kill himself and thus passed on the curse to his first born. Poor Azaad.

@bold : so very clever of u, baisa !

The lines where you described him holding onto to Adaq and pleading with him not to leave, really tugged at my heart strings!

Adaq Khan teasing his huzoor! I was waiting for something like this. You sly old man, pretending not to know that he's referring to Mahira😆

Adaq is a darling...he always acted as Azad's father figure in life and now sheltered Mahira under his wing...and a sworn azma shipper 😆

Azaad knew Mahira was watching him?😳 He's just sitting there preening under her attention. So cute!😆
and sprouting poetry...oh so geeky !

Mahira is gone tree climbing I see. I was crossing my fingers and hoping that it wasn't Amaad on the horse. Puri mutton ki dukaan collapsed onto Mahira and she didn't break her bones?😲😆

LOL ! i actually have a theory regarding this. he didnot fall directly upon Mahira...he fell few feet away and tumbled twice or thrice to cut the motion and came over her. nehi toh solid 220 lb of flesh and bones is enough to squash my poor baby !😆

Our darlings in a compromising position.. I wonder if anyone is going to walk in on them.

No body , I guess...but how will they face each other after such a royal sprawling and rolling over meadows session. what r they gonna say to each other...esp mahira, in such improper halath😆

Looking forward to the dreaded date with Amaad.

PS: I wish shiraaz belonged to Azaad
shiraz belongs to the whole household. like he is seen with lautif, amaad and this time with azad too.

Awesome update Shreya!😃
oooiii no comment of mahira's dream ??😭😭

Originally posted by: mineforever

Another fabulous chapter. This time we got to read about Azaad's inner turmoil also. Really enjoying it. 😊

Originally posted by: NanduVijay

Loved the update completely.I think nearly half of the update belongs to Azaad. His feelings towards Mahira, the consequences he had to face due to the cheap act of Amaad and regarding the curse that is on him are beautifully written.

hello my 1st reviewer of new update !
lovely long response!! I just love em, when they are lengthy😃
gives me scope to interact with u wonderful people and tell u so many tiny lil things that r in my head but couldnot find their way into the update...afterall chapters shouldnt look daunting and endless lol !
This is the 1st time Azad is introduced properly with his inner thoughts...and as expected his head is full of Mahira !😆 poor guy , he didnt even have a chance to back off...he is like almost knee deep😆

Is the little girl in the fort is the kid of Amaad?
nehi, that one is not his, mercifully. But you never know kahan kahan he has his little ones all around the country😆😡

Our hero has become a full time stalker. So, he has seen Amaad flirting with Mahira. I think Amaad had to count his days now. He doesn't know that Amaad has asked Mahira to come with him to the village fair. He is very jealous and I totally loved that about him. Isn't jealous men a treat to watch?

oh yes, men are so cutely unreasonable and impulsive when they r jealous. Yaa, he is stalking her suru sey hi ! kya kare Mahira piqued his attention from the very first introduction, ab tho chah kar bhi door nehi reh sakta ladka ! yes, he saw them from a balcony high above, so only saw his flirting,i think agar usse pata chalta what that idiot was proposing to mahira, he would have really killed him😆

The conversation between Azaad and Adaq was really awesome. I was laughing throughout their conversation. This guy, Adaq has a quite superb screen space and had wonderful chemistry with both Mahira and Azaad.
yes,Adaq is like a father figure to him, a close friend,mentor and adviser. and now Adaq has literally adopted Mahira, so he has now two young people under his wing whom he desperately wants to fall in love for each other. And he feels aag already lag chuka hai, so he is happily fanning to spread the flame, he is one real enthusiastic cupid, i say😆

Mahira's scenes were equally good. Along with M, i am now very interested in knowing about Nasser's death, the secret he had written in his books, the curse, about the secrets that the fort holds.
Now, M has also written her poetry about him in the book. I m sure, one day, A is going to read all her poetries. Waiting for that day.
Maybe oneday he will see the notebook he had so thoughtfully gifted is filled with amazing verses, all about her feelings for him...just imagine how he would he react...there would be like drowned with torrents of emotions, his heart would feel like bursting from the weight of it !
the riddle - the curse - and the secrets !! well well the veil o mystery will be gradually lifted, my friend !

So, A already knows that M is watching him from the window. Really nice. I never expected this from him. He had now no job to do other than stalking M, get watched by her, to protect her. Does he know about Zaroon? I want to know his reaction after knowing that Mahira was forced engagement and was tortured.
Zaroon ! lets see, mahira has already told adaq...but has adaq shared this info with his huzoor. Dnt think so. Maybe he didnot get time. ussey pehelehi Amad ney bomb phod di Azad ke dimag mein.
haaha, he was just enjoying his moment😆 The thrill of feeling admiring eyes all over him and getting inspirations for lovely romantic sayaris.

Shreya, please kill this Amaad in the next chapter. Else, I am going to kill him myself( I was thinking of the movie Inkheart here, so that I can get inside the story and have him finished). He is such a cheap guy and now coming near my M baby.
hahahha ! dnt kill him just now, ussey toh ab aur bhi niche girna hai ! kill him then😆

Amazing update. Waiting for the next chapter.
And thank you once again for taking time, reading my story and writing down this amazing response ! I am overwhelmed 😃. your support and positive encouragement means a lot to me. they helps me try harder !



Sorry for the double post. My son has sent the above one before spell check.
aww! hello little man ! being naughy,are we 😆

Originally posted by: -Amri-

And your story becomes more and more amazing by the day...kya kahen! You do have a way with words.

Thanks for the PM!