AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76 - Page 44

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Oh sofu, I so wanted my pursuit buddies to read this.

Thank u for Atleast giving it a try. And liking it.go through the rest of the pages and post on each one u read.

DUA : awww how damn cute this banda is. Why aren't such men made these days. *sigh*

Me : those were days, darling ! ab na woh zamana raha nah woh aadmi😆

Originally posted by: BabyHimavari

So here i am here with my reply di...

First of all thanks for putting such a detailed long chapter... i love reading it all along and it was amazing...

AzMa's night scene... Ishhh!!... Just true dreamy... I can't explain what impression it left in my imaginary mind... i can clearly watch out the scene... the beautiful belle mahira singing and dancing all around and the handsome beast azad watching over her from the darkness of night... and suddenly the light and darkness confronted each other as tehy came face to face...

oh wow what a poetic summary of a dreamlike romantic scene !@ bold - just loved the line! kitni acchi likhti hai tu.😃

As a repulse when she backed off his steps his hands automatically extended as if trying to stop her.. amazing scene......

yaa, when she was not really repulsed...itz just her woman instinct took over seeing a man in such close vicinity all of a sudden.

Mahira's offer to the chieftain really cracked me... she wants him to work alongside her in the library... poor boy.. i can literally imagine his situation..😆.. it must take a whole life for him to deny her...🤣.. mahi baby rocks..⭐️⭐️
Read the converation I have reposted for u !
And voila..😲... he actually watched her bruises?!! in library i guess while he was stalking her?!!🤓... Di just tell me one thing how minutely he watched her?!!🤣

read the convo !

He gifted her a diary like thing to place her thoughts... aww sweet... first ever gift to would be lady 😳... a perfect gift for a noble and literate lady like her who has so many amusing thoughts to convey...❤️

yep, he is a shayar and very cultured young man ! and see he chose such an elegant 1st gift for his woman. so well thought ! kash, amar bor er brain eo eto buddhi thakto, poor guy becomes clueless when it comes to gifting me on vday / anivday / bday😆

So mahira finds a secret old riddle from the family library which mentioned about some holy maiden who would come to withdraw the curse by her own sacrifice. I'm guessing that the holy maiden is none other than mahira... now eager to know that what sacrifice she had to perform to get rid of the curse...

yaa letz see what turns out !
I am loving adaq khan and mahira's bonding too...😳.
me 3 !!

and so the casanova amad already laid his eyes upon mahira.....
kuttey kaminey lucchey lafangey!


over all i love the gripping twists and dark mystery overflowing throughout the story..,.. will be waiting to explore more...

sukriya !

and again extreme sorry for late reply..😕

Oh..so Adaq chacha had enough authority to invite ppl to join the hall? Thought he would have to take permission from the Jaigirdaar or the Begum herself. I quite liked that actually..Goes to show he didn't in any way consider her lowly.

The Durbar hall reminded me of the hall from Jodha Akbar.

The fact that Mahira didn't bring along enough clothes speaks of her desperation to get away from the monster.Liked the way you used the comparison between her & Begum to describe her features. Remarks on one's physical attribute are very hurtful.Even though the one who said those comments was a bitch, still it would tear apart one's confidence down.Liked this strong Mahira who has vowed not to bring anything down.

Ok,,this Latif character...do u remember Kabir's brother in Rep, Rajveer? That guy comes to mind when I read Latif's part. Very tall, does not talk too much and yet has the necessary softness & kindness.

Ahahahahaha..Mir Baksh teasing Mahira was a delight to read!! The cheeky guy..So he hasn't also not failed to notice that there is something in Mahira that has garnered the attention of Azaad miya. Poor Mahira completely failing to comprehend the exchange between Latif & Mir Baksh!!

Oh my my...In a short span of time, Adaq has gone quite protective of our Mahira!!

Oh..poor Adaq..fond memories of the good ol times coming back.

The fire..what started the fire? Begum changed during that phase of unconsciousness..Hmm..so did anyone do black magic on her during that time? Why did Bade Huzoor commit suicide?

Going by the glimpses of Begum in the previous chapters, she seems very cold & ruthless. A kid suddenly loses everything..his dad & his mom after the fire..with no warmth whatsoever in his life. Wounds run deep...Is the Begum his real mom? During that time, wasn't it normal to have many wives? Did the others perish in the fire?

Apt song..Havent heard of it before!! Thanks for the link..

(Suggestion : If possible, include the translation of the lyrics too.Not all in the forum know Hindi very well. They will be lost. The beauty of the update is associated with the lyrics.So an understanding of the lyrics could make the reading experience more enjoyable )

Ahahahaha..our Azaad miya was watching her.Hayee.dont describe him so sexily yaar.Kuch kuch hota hain😳

Damn those flames..By the way, is she the only one who has seen the flames?

Lol..she quickly changed the topic. Thank goodness..or Azaad miya would have asked to continue singing.

Aww..Mahira..if only you knew how you have affected our hero. He certainly does not think low of you.

He was like a rich, unknown script that demanded extreme patience and skill to be deciphered-This line is very good.Completely sums up the mysteriousness of Azaad.

Gosh..I so love this Adaq character..For me, his interaction with Mahir always stands out.A father figure to her. Even I was doubtful initially when Azaad saw those bruises..but then saw your replies to the other comments

Aaah..his first gift to her!!! Very thoughtful.

Ahahahahaha..naughty girl..imagining things just like our dear writer here..

Erm..maid..sacrifice? So it is fate that has brought her there..some unknown forces. Curse that forefather willingly brought upon them?Did they do something bad?

Hmm..so the fox reappears..and already chokri patana shuru!!Douchebag...He gives off the eaary vibes.Something isnt right with him.Either the TV character is making me view this Amaad as such or you have really penned the character like that!!

Awesome update!! Favourite part (surprisingly) was Adaq-Mahira convo, then scene in Durbar hall...and then our Azaad scene 😃(Something is wrong with me..shouldnt Azaad scene be the first 😕)

Originally posted by: tikit

Well read 7 parts in one sitting. Its really an interesting ff. The character of azaad and mahira is fairly well etched. Loving this ff.


Thank u so much !

One more thing why is azaad mysterious? Badi begum, is she even human ?

Now, now ! these questions cant be answered immediately. U have to wait for the coming chapters 😃


Also pm me the next part.
I shall. Plz press the like button on the 1st post of the opening page. that is my default pm list.

I peeped in to say I'm waiting for your next update and noticed how our conversation turned out to be so useful😆 man I didn't think we chatted that long lol But it surely was one enlightening conversation and it answered most of my questions regarding the story and events.