AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76 - Page 28

Awesome update yaar👍🏼
Adaq khan liking her n proud of her awww😳
N again their encounter is shoo cute😆
Plzz continue soon😊

Yay! another update *does a little dance*

Originally posted by: Ishq-Dua

Yay! another update *does a little dance*

Can I say I'm loving this foot in her mouth Mahira 😆

First she insults the handsome Huzoor Sirkar and then she calls him a superhuman perfection lmao I love this girl. Btw nobody blames her the guy makes any girl go weak in the knees ☺️*blush*

And oh my oh my he left his quarters for the first time only for Mahira awww how cute. He's a pretty bad liar too😆

Mahira writing her own verses absentmindedly, I can't wait to see Azad's reaction as he reads those lines.

I'm loving the story and you truly are an amazing writer, you have your way with words.

The way you describe the places and the details you add is just brilliant. I can see it in my mind thanks to your wonderful writing skills😳

Keep rocking like that!

Waiting for next update impatiently

Thanks for the pm :D

hey dua !
girl, u r a very good writer too. so the admiration is mutual, u can say ! I have posted review on u thread 😃
and Mahira is having a tough time controlling her tongue...this never happened before. she was a composed very much in control over herself type girl. now something just snapped...she doesnt know what...and is feeling extremely uneasy, and to burythat uneasiness she is blabbering too much..ofcourse speaking all ulta things 😆... bechari kya kare...inta hotness bardasht nehi karpayi. actually she is us 😆...we all have gone weak in our knees with one intense look from him...woh bhi toh ladki i hai, kya dosh hai bechari ki !
and the lord ! yep !! iska bhi dimag khiska 😆

Good job shreya! 😃 Res-ing for now.

As promised , reviewer has come to work..Lol, haven't brushed!!

Chap 4

Ratest?? What's ratest? (title) Ohh..went to page 1..u meant rarest!! Tu bhi na..title main hi galti kar di😆

Sirf Mahira hi nahi, hum bhi expect kar rahe te- alishaan bungalow..I mean fortress.

Aaah the intro speech..havent we also prepared for convos which never happen .

I loved the way you went into the details of the fortress. Duuno why but I was suddenly reminded of St. Basil's Cathedral in Moscow!!! But that's well maintained unlike Azaad miya's abode.😃

Hmmm...mysterious...*Gumnaam hai koi, badnaam hai koi kis ko khabar, kaun hai vo, anajaan hai...*

Bacchi? Pls yaar...don't make the child our lead's offspring. Keep his virginity intact. 😆😆😆

I had read the chap before..so I know u didn't write those lines. But still going with the flow..My thoughts were ..." Whoa..this Shreya writes poems too...yeh toh complete package nikli..I will improve if masterji takes me in" LOL.

The herbs went over my head..except for tulsi and neem don't know the rest!!

Tiger fat??? No wonder they are endangered.😕

Toh bandha aa hi gaya chokri ke saamne.

(Don't explain the man in such great detail.It makes readers like me feel disconnected to the story...cuz I stop reading and start daydreaming 😳)

Ahahahaha...fortress guard eh?

Atta girl..give him back..dont take abuse from anyone!! A tad too far with her comment of "finer qualities"

For me, the best parts in the story were- the intro of the child (something very soothing abt it) and then when Mahira chides herself.

😃

Overall, a good "picturesque" chapter.

One chap down ..one more 2 go

Chap 5

This Adaq Khan reminds me of Zoya's abbu (don't know his real name). 😃Lol..can imagine Adaq going all bewildered seeing Mahira cry.

So Adaq already sensed the undercurrents eh? Wise man indeed.

Sigghh...being hasty in judgement ..havent we all been there? ( off topic- ek baat boloon..I firmly believe you cant always blame ppl for misjudging u cuz we don't take care in how we portray ourselves. There are idiots who will misjudge u no matter what.. But you got to give others a chance to get to know u too...Sorry, just had to get it of my chest)

Ohh...Amad is not as good as he seems. *rolls sleeves and prepares for a fight if he does anything to Mahira*

Ahahahahaha...superhuman perfection eh? Lol..Mahira...modern slangs like hawwwt seekho!!😳

Hmm..so the old hag makes an entry.

Lol..Azaad couldn't contain his curiosity I just loved that part.

The part where "Azad's brown eyes twitched dangerously" ..that made me go into dream mode again.😳

I am going to wrap up my review now..head is pounding again.🤢

I see a pattern here..a slow detailed chap..and then a "happening" chap..Enjoyed this more than the previous one ⭐️

what ?? noo !
Such glaring typos and nobody mentioned ?? haw ! woh title mein ! chi chi !
**rolls in mud
***dies of shame 😳
Miss Sherlock Purple baisa !! aapko bhi nehi dikhi ?
thank u thank u amy sahiba !

Loved the chappy😳⭐️

Loved the moments of adaq and mahira⭐️

Adaq seems to be a fatherly figure to azzu and Now even mahi...

He somehow feels the connection to mahi also

He understands that her heart is of gold⭐️

So 2 new entries in this chaptr

Ek badi begum aur dusri ghazala

Ghazala badi begum ki khaas maid... Same like the show

Ok so here she is not witty ...but an Ice hearted women

Badi begum seems not happy with mahi's presense

Hmm

Azzad never left his quarters at that time of night

And today he lies... Just to see mahi😉

Adaq senses his lie...

Pull kumar geeting pulled towards mahi

hmm aag tho dono taraf barabar hain

Mahi calls him ''superhuman perfection''🤣

And azzad lying ...yeah his lie was terrible 😆

Looks lik dono ek duje ek taraf attract ho rahe hain

And mahi writing her own verses

Wht would be azzu ka reaction

Thanks for the pm. Amazing chapter. Loved Mahira-Adaq khan's conversation. I think they both will share a father-daughter kind of relationship.
Mahira is such a sweet heart that it is impossible for anyone to not fall for her. I think Azaad has already fallen to Mahira's charms and even Adaq has guessed it.
Waiting for more Azma scenes.

Awesome update
Loved it
Convo between adaq & mahira was nice. He was shocked to see azad in ladies section of the palace. He thought abt mahira, why she is there & needed that position. Liked her work & told her to rest. Azad mahira scene was good. He listened her talk. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Aahana.

Loved the chappy😳⭐️

Loved the moments of adaq and mahira⭐️

Adaq seems to be a fatherly figure to azzu and Now even mahi...

He somehow feels the connection to mahi also

He understands that her heart is of gold⭐️

Atleast mahi got a well wisher in that castle

Yah he is a true we'll wisher of azad and he has started liking mahira too. Doesn't want that amad banda anywhere near her.

So 2 new entries in this chaptr

Ek badi begum aur dusri ghazala

Ghazala badi begum ki khaas maid... Same like the show

Ok so here she is not witty ...but an Ice hearted women

Badi begum seems not happy with mahi's presense

Hmm

Yaa they r same like theshow.only this badibegum character will b more layered.o

Azzad never left his quarters at that time of night

And today he lies... Just to see mahi😉

Adaq senses his lie...

Pull kumar geeting pulled towards mahi

hmm aag tho dono taraf barabar hain

aag sayed abhi laage nehi...itz like the slowburning before forestfire of aag 😆

Mahi calls him ''superhuman perfection''🤣

And azzad lying ...yeah his lie was terrible 😆

Looks lik dono ek duje ek taraf attract ho rahe hain.

Yaah getting curious of each other. Mahira never so enyone more enigmatic as Azad, and Azad neved got scolded by a beautiful maiden, uparsey she is so highly educated, rarest thing those days,upar sey khubsurat bhi, aur usually he doesnt see women around him...sab mil ke he is like gone case 😆

And mahi writing her own verses

Wht would be azzu ka reaction

and amaad character seems mysterious just lik the show Waiting eagerly for the next..😊

Thank u darling. Lovely comment. 😃