AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76 - Page 29

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

what ?? noo !
Such glaring typos and nobody mentioned ?? haw ! woh title mein ! chi chi !
**rolls in mud
***dies of shame 😳
Miss Sherlock Purple baisa !! aapko bhi nehi dikhi ?
thank u thank u amy sahiba !

Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_

As promised , reviewer has come to work..Lol, haven't brushed!!
Aww...main dhamki marke laayi kya tumhe 😆

Chap 4

Ratest?? What's ratest? (title) Ohh..went to page 1..u meant rarest!! Tu bhi na..title main hi galti kar di😆
Aur kisi ney nehi batai mujhe ! dekho toh, kya embarrassment hai !thank u ! now itz corrected !😳

Sirf Mahira hi nahi, hum bhi expect kar rahe te- alishaan bungalow..I mean fortress.

Aaah the intro speech..havent we also prepared for convos which never happen .

I loved the way you went into the details of the fortress. Duuno why but I was suddenly reminded of St. Basil's Cathedral in Moscow!!! But that's well maintained unlike Azaad miya's abode.😃

Moscow !! noo stuffs there r too well maintained...imagine a ruins of Scotland or Ireland or a deserted Cathedral in village of Italy,1000yrs old...that would be the correct image.

Hmmm...mysterious...*Gumnaam hai koi, badnaam hai koi kis ko khabar, kaun hai vo, anajaan hai...*

Bacchi? Pls yaar...don't make the child our lead's offspring.

Oh pleez! what is it with people cribbing bacchi ko azad / amad 's matt banao ! ARRE BHAI ! she is not high born ! ab khush ! lo spoiler bhi hogaya !!

Keep his virginity intact. 😆😆😆

ab yeh toh ap bahut tough demand rakhi, yaara ! see, timeperiod ko nazar rakhte hue, it sounds just impossible...boys of noble households, those days, used to lose their virginity around 14/15 😆. It was part of the rituals that ushered them into adult men's world. Now celibate for years ? yes that is sure shot. Even as long as 8yrs. But Virgin ?? ermm Noo I am afraid 😉

had read the chap before..so I know u didn't write those lines. But still going with the flow..My thoughts were ..." Whoa..this Shreya writes poems too...yeh toh complete package nikli..I will improve if masterji takes me in" LOL.

ab kaun kiski guruji hai, that is a subject for debate...check out ur OS review😉

The herbs went over my head..except for tulsi and neem don't know the rest!!

some are real ayurvedic stuffs, others pure imagination !😆

Tiger fat??? No wonder they are endangered.😕

Awtw poor animal lover in you got offended.I understand. but woh elixir bhi toh priceless hai !😳

Toh bandha aa hi gaya chokri ke saamne.

(Don't explain the man in such great detail.It makes readers like me feel disconnected to the story...cuz I stop reading and start daydreaming 😳)

well that is the intention...so I shall add more graphic details from now on !😆

Ahahahaha...fortress guard eh?

Atta girl..give him back..dont take abuse from anyone!! A tad too far with her comment of "finer qualities".

yaa she got carried away venting all her pent up frustration on the poor guy 😆

For me, the best parts in the story were- the intro of the child (something very soothing abt it) and then when Mahira chides herself.

😃

Overall, a good "picturesque" chapter.

Thank u ji !! 😃

One chap down ..one more 2 go

Chap 5

This Adaq Khan reminds me of Zoya's abbu (don't know his real name). 😃Lol..can imagine Adaq going all bewildered seeing Mahira cry.

u mean the character zoya's abbu gaffur siddiqui ? 😲 or the man who played it ?

So Adaq already sensed the undercurrents eh? Wise man indeed.

Sigghh...being hasty in judgement ..havent we all been there? ( off topic- ek baat boloon..I firmly believe you cant always blame ppl for misjudging u cuz we don't take care in how we portray ourselves. There are idiots who will misjudge u no matter what.. But you got to give others a chance to get to know u too...Sorry, just had to get it of my chest.

Absolutely agree with u. we donot remain in our true selves all the time, so neither are other people whom we judge from single interaction.thatz why I hav never believed in love at 1st sight or assessing someone at first interaction. hasty judgment and reacting according to it is a big no no to me no matter how cute they appear in shows/books/movies).

Ohh...Amad is not as good as he seems. *rolls sleeves and prepares for a fight if he does anything to Mahira*

he is one shady fellow

Ahahahahaha...superhuman perfection eh? Lol..Mahira...modern slangs like hawwwt seekho!!😳

oh yes she was singing hawwt and saaxy all the time! just couldnt use those terms, not coined that time naah ! bechari kya miss kiya !😆

Hmm..so the old hag makes an entry.

Lol..Azaad couldn't contain his curiosity I just loved that part.

The part where "Azad's brown eyes twitched dangerously" ..that made me go into dream mode again.😳

**blush**

I am going to wrap up my review now..head is pounding again.🤢

haye ! I am so sorry...khich ke leayi tumhe 😭

I see a pattern here..a slow detailed chap..and then a "happening" chap..Enjoyed this more than the previous one ⭐️

Thank u ! hope to keep u entertained with next updates.

get well soon ! and Update ur TS😃

Was just pulling ur leg when I said it should not be his child 😆😆 Uske 10 yah 20 bacchein ho, as long as he is prepared to love our feisty heroine, I am prepared to read 😆😆😆 In fact, I had an argument with a member in Rep forum when I saw a comment that the only "fresh" heroes are acceptable for the heroine..and that they don't deserve to be together

Originally posted by: NanduVijay

Thanks for the pm. Amazing chapter. Loved Mahira-Adaq khan's conversation. I think they both will share a father-daughter kind of relationship.
yaa he would be like her father figure.😃
Mahira is such a sweet heart that it is impossible for anyone to not fall for her. I think Azaad has already fallen to Mahira's charms and even Adaq has guessed it.
lol ! arent they cute...already getting attracted to each other...but ho ! amad bhi hai...as a haddi !
Waiting for more Azma scenes.
more will follow !

Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_

Was just pulling ur leg when I said it should not be his child 😆😆 Uske 10 yah 20 bacchein ho, as long as he is prepared to love our feisty heroine, I am prepared to read 😆😆😆 In fact, I had an argument with a member in Rep forum when I saw a comment that the only "fresh" heroes are acceptable for the heroine..and that they don't deserve to be together

consider the age factor darling ! those who write such nonsenses are usually either dreamy eyed teenagers or in their early 20s...they r still in their barbie doll castle ! usse kya pata actuality kya hai 😃

What...us zamaane mein they lost their virginity soo young?? That's new info for me.😲
yaa they got married around the age of 15,lose virginity even before that , I am talking about male folks.

I meant the actor who played Zoya's father. He has a kind face (when he chooses to smile)
okk ! yaa that would be a good choice.

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

such a long update wooohooo

loved it!!!!

interesting n i love how it turning out to be

And today he lies... Just to see mahi😉

Adaq senses his lie...

Pull kumar geeting pulled towards mahi

hmm aag tho dono taraf barabar hain

aag sayed abhi laage nehi...itz like the slowburning before forestfire of aag 😆