Thread 2 Asya FF....Mere Humnawah Part 13 updated(15/7/16)

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#591

Awesome update dear
Loved it
Dilshad told everything to razia abt Zoya. Both were happy. Liked the dreamy scene. Asad was seeing Zoya everywhere. He was not happy to know that his mothers choose someone. Moon sighting scene was nice. Waiting for Asad dilshad convo. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

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Monali5

@Monali5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#592

Beautifully written update ASAD'S dream sequence was nicely written but favourite parts were( BILLO presented as a maid and HASEEENA called as FATSO) 😆 but next update a little more of asya scenes required ❤️

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#593

Amazing update

Loved reading it

So, dilshad told everything to razia and they joined hands

Loved reading the whole song sequence

Asad seeing zoya everywhere was very cute

Looking forward to know what happens next in the story

Please continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#594

Awesome.

Very well written jassu...

Tbh I enjoyed the second update more than the first one...

It truly was fantastically written and the song was perfect...

Finally budhu Ahmed khan realised 😆

And I still want to know why he rejected her proposal the first time.

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#595

Beautiful update

Toot your own horn

U deserve it

Love sequence

Wonder y Asad is so hesitant to get married

Can't believe he spent the entire chand raat with zoya 😃

So raziya knows now too

Wonder what she plans to do

She saying she has finalizing his nikaah

Cont soon

PS how did he end up with zoya earring

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#596

Awesome loved it
dilshad told about zoya to raziya
asad imagine zoya everywhere
update soon

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#597

Awesome update
Nd it was soo long.. Yayiee
Loved it
The dream sequence with asad seeing zoya all over was fantastic . Specially when he saw zoya in the moon..!
Superb.. So wanna read more
Update soon

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Yash

@_yash_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#598

Well written and beautiful update

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#599

Amazing Update...
Soo I guess Dilshaad ke guilty feel hona meko thoda ajeeb laga...because it was just in the flow of emotions... 😆
Razia bi ko itna sweet na padhne ki aadat nhi hai... 😆 , but for a change she is good here...but I was wondering one thing...
Dilshad and Razia jab kitchen mein ASYA ka case discuss karr rahe thay...uss time dono suddenly English mein kyun baat karne lag gaye...hahahahha 🤣 , ekdum hindi bolte bolte koi English bol de toh ajeeb lagta hai... 🤪

Now coming to the other thing...
Asad ka POV abhi bhi clear nhi hai mujhe...ki usne Zoya ko naa kyun kaha tha uss din... 😕
Still now as we can read and imagine...he is in a way having some kind of emotions and feelings for Zoya...which his subconscious self is approving off...aur iske dimaag ne proposal ko mana kardiya tha uss din...
Phir bi...that whole dream sequence was very good...and descriptive too...imagine karne mein asani hoti hai...

Loved reading this part..
Continue soonish...
And Thank You for the RES... 😳 😊